Insight Chapter 44 - Family? World?
Added 2022-01-15 03:09:13 +0000 UTCIdk what to call this, the ultimate chapter. I thought I was going to end it sooner than I was and just include the last bit in the epilogue, which would have made family the ideal chapter name, but with the rest at the end, Idk.
I also don't like the special ability description for domain right now. I always hate coming up with the right wording for those, so that ain't final. Ideas welcome, as always.
This has been a trip, not gonna lie. Just the epilogue and some editing to go! Thank you so much for supporting me on this journey, it means the world to me. <3
Now I gotta figure out the blurb too. I kinda forgot I had to write that. I hate the blurb. >.<
Comments
Also remember that it was Ashanna's word, not Jade's.
Jay - Siphon
2022-01-16 10:49:06 +0000 UTCIt may seem a bit odd but jade has never experienced a romantic attraction do you remember your first crush as a teenager? She trusted him and had enough faith in him that she'd planned to leave what pretty much amounts to a 'will' with him if she died and he let his mom call her his pet. That hurt just reading let alone experiencing π’
2022-01-15 17:51:12 +0000 UTCAm I alone in thinking 'heartbreak' is a bit too strong? I know people can and do fall that hard and that fast but after rereading everything from Briar's appearance, I don't think Jade felt that deeply. Maybe 'heartache'? It's still pretty strong but isn't a synonym for 'world shattering'
Stuart Thwaites
2022-01-15 15:14:11 +0000 UTCChapter title should be Family. Next Book title should be Domain... although I would love the sequel to Lorus Lake before the next book in this series...
Justin "Johnist" Johanson
2022-01-15 03:49:31 +0000 UTC
