Patreon Suggestion - Forced to be The Bride(Animated)
Added 2022-05-03 20:04:34 +0000 UTCHere's the finished art, and I was able to fix that little typo. If you ever find any mistakes, please let me know. English is not my first language, so it's a way for me to get better at it. :)
Hope you all enjoy the art! ❤
Comments
Sublime
Spartiate666
2024-02-17 22:54:17 +0000 UTCso pretty
AzureAKASapphire
2022-05-07 02:22:21 +0000 UTCI think the look of embarrassed and repressed excitement is perfect as drawn.
Erin Halfelven at BigCloset
2022-05-03 23:36:24 +0000 UTCI came up with the dialogue later, that's why it doesn't fit with the whole image. To be honest, I'm not happy drawing characters in forced situations, I feel quite uncomfortable with that. Thanks anyway.
Pink Horizons
2022-05-03 23:21:17 +0000 UTCI love the dress and the overall look! Amazing work :)
Alesha
2022-05-03 22:14:20 +0000 UTCI love the outfit, and concept. I think a bit of a more embarassed expression would suit the situation and text better. The mouth reflects a look of concern decently, but the rest of the face reflects more of an excited expression, which detracts from the "forced" intent of the scene. Things that can help with a concerned look, could be lowering the eyebrow then adding a slightly more upward inclinded peak of the eyebrows, a couple forehead wrinkles, dilated pupils, a very slight dip in the upper eye lids, etc. Since it's cartooney, possible even a worried sweat droplet on the side of their face. Additionally, body language can also help with a concerned reaction. The bride in this scene is posed with a sense of feminine confidence, shown by the graceful positioning of the hands and confident stance in heels. A more concerned reaction, might have the bride with their knees together, but their feet spread a bit apart while toes pointing inward. The hands could be held upward and away from the body with the elbows low, and fingers splayed out in an almost clawlike position as if they might lose balance in their heels, or they don't know where to rest their hands with all the femme fluff of the dress. Sorry for the long reply. It's intended to be constructive to help you as an artist, not an attack on this drawing. It can be difficult to improve as an artist if everyone only responds "Looks great!".
Cakey
2022-05-03 22:01:26 +0000 UTCWhat a lovely gown!
Zero Wing
2022-05-03 21:10:10 +0000 UTCBeautiful!
cvip98geo
2022-05-03 20:07:40 +0000 UTC
