Chapter 96: The Competition
Added 2025-01-12 02:12:30 +0000 UTCComments
So true. I get the names mixed up just about every other day.
R. Maxwell Steele
2025-01-13 08:09:35 +0000 UTCI just have to say this, not as criticism but to let you know how some people read. When I read names I appreciate names that are both phonetically unique and visually unique. This allows me more time to enjoy the story. When a character is named Bob and another Bobby it creates a stutter in my reading flow. I mention this because Wei Lin and the cutely similar Lin Mei do the same. In this story it doesn't really happen often enough that it's annoying because you often tag them as Wei Lin and Lin Mei and I've begun just reading them as Wei and Lin but it does happen often enough to notice.
musashi
2025-01-13 07:30:12 +0000 UTCBro really threw a classic Faceslapping Scene at the MC lmao
Denis Schreiner
2025-01-12 09:45:47 +0000 UTCStop. It's hammer time.
Igor Kaplunov
2025-01-12 04:30:56 +0000 UTCI know more chapters are to be had on the morrow, but cliffhangers are still a disappointment.
John_Lasko
2025-01-12 04:21:17 +0000 UTCTime loop training would be so good right now, he could even do it everyday and extend the time with ratio from 1 day: 1 month. 8 weeks is what, 60 months = 5 years? Cutting the first 4 weeks for extra duty in herb garden in still 2.5 years per 4 weeks. But I guess author wouldn’t want that…
Touch
2025-01-12 03:24:57 +0000 UTCI realised that I don't need to add anything: I turned to leave, not bothering to respond. I had more important things to do than deal with whatever this was. The tournament was only eight weeks away, and I needed to—
Kynan
2025-01-12 02:49:59 +0000 UTCI live for the slapping of faces!
Perf
2025-01-12 02:48:07 +0000 UTCNo no it's not a time skip, he's just registering, I'll add in some dialogue to make it more clear
Kynan
2025-01-12 02:47:32 +0000 UTCSo... He talked about doing time loop training because he had 8 weeks before the tournament but then we time skip to the tournament. I like you subverted our expectations but dang. I was looking forward to the protagonist growing stronger and effectively hiding his strength because he can't use the two suns power.
Krenn
2025-01-12 02:45:13 +0000 UTCHow can you leave us before we finally get to see some serious face slapping? Worst cliffhanger so far imo. Lmao
Akkido
2025-01-12 02:16:29 +0000 UTC
