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Chapter 105: I'll Be Back Soon

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If he hits that checkpoint before he has a chance to study with the crazy blue sun people that's going to suck.

BookDragonling

There is a 'checkpoint' if he can live long enough

Kynan

Probably for the best, Azure feels like all that Ke Yin really needs at this point.

Brandon Lydick

That is actually a very nice and comprehensible way to implement a system. When the world is based on a synthesis of physical technology (AI based) and magical technology (spirits & rituals etc.) them it would be much more comprehensible 👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼 niceee approach and good questioning @Dan

Maitreya Buddha

That's a good idea. Sometimes, a too complicated system or just too many system things early on distract from the story (mental load), even more so when used in a cultivation story since you have to keep an eye for so many details. Now that the cultivation part is slowly established, Azure can develop on that LitRPG world more naturally, etc.

LordRhyolith

Huh, bummer that he has to start all over again each time. I hoped there could be some kind of checkpoint perhaps? Each time he breaks through maybe..?

Flippu

Ah, I liked that quite a bit actually. Hopefully he keeps it when he visits. But what about the "overly stable qi" and adding "natural variance" as stealth? That gonna have an alternative explanation?

RedFaux

I wonder if Tom was some kind of parallel life? That universes version of him? And Ke Yin yet another version?

RedFaux

A Schrodinger cat. I like it

greg

I removed most of it. I need to go back and edit the early chapters. Spoiler alert - I decided it was better to save the LitRPG aspects for when Ke Yin visits a pure LitRPG world. I won't say when Ke Yin will be visiting such a world but it will happen, in that world the focus will be on systems, and who knows, maybe Azure will get an upgrade...

Kynan

Back in chapter 3 the system did a lot more than talk, it had tasks, rewards, stats, features, a Combat Mode, movement prediction algorithms, Skill levels, resource analysis, updated spiritual architchture on its own, provided progress reports, made arrays, and had combat exp What happened to that?

Dun

It'd be frickin *wild* if he managed to bring Maya back somehow

Joseph Smith

It'll be written in a loop style so should hopefully be a faster pace than previous times

Kynan

I hope this is a relatively short jaunt, just to grab some stuff before heading back. A lot of the chicanery with getting into the sect can be handled through just a quick description of what happened.

Vincent Mason

Yea. Go get Maya.... or the Vine?

greg

And we’re BACK!!! Go get your little vine friend! 🥰

Nicholas Pankratz


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