Chapter 131: Out of Energy
Added 2025-01-23 21:15:17 +0000 UTCComments
The fight was good but one of the things I always hated about cultivation novels is how the participants in a battle just walk off after causing devastation. It would be nice to have someone who not only cleans up after themselves but improves things a bit. The bear might like that too.
musashi
2025-02-13 06:50:37 +0000 UTCEvery world that Ke Yin visits has things to offer, some will be magic systems (Two Sun's World), comprehension, battle experience, creation of new techniques, understanding of other worlds, and so much more that I don't want to spoil. The story has been planned to be super long, but nothing is random, I've planned how it all fits together. When we reach the blue sun arc, we'll have a better understanding of their system of runes and how it fits with the red sun's system. What Ke Yin learned this chapter was that as beneficial other magic systems are, Qi is still his base. It doesn't mean he won't work on runes, he still has his training plan that he will follow, but he now knows not to neglect Qi techniques. He already knew this but experience is when someone truly understands.
Kynan
2025-01-24 01:31:14 +0000 UTCI imagine this is something that will become more of a problem in the future. I'm unsure what you have planned, but juggling multiple power systems may make others seem too underutilized or feel like arcs are filler if never called back to. The red sun has challenged the tree multiple times, maybe the red sun could be growing too strong, forcing him to either balance out his attention. Leading to a blue sun arc to keep things 'balanced' or something, or focus on his chi cultivation to empower the tree to allow it to continue it's easy defeat of the red sun. I can't tell if that's what you've been foreshadowing or not, but the first option of wanting to keep everything balanced or in harmony could add more weight or need on multiple power systems being weaved together. Potential keeping conflict between whatever other aspects he adds to his inner world in check? Otherwise it might turn out like a lot of other stories where the author seems to forget something existed 100 chapters ago, and creates seemingly massive plot hole. So far the story is awesome, just a small worry
Sparkley Unicorn
2025-01-24 01:22:42 +0000 UTCIt was meant to show how he is too reliant on the Two Sun's world system, but I think a little paragraph about how yggy wants to come out is a good idea, and why Ke Yin doesn't let him
Kynan
2025-01-24 00:51:21 +0000 UTCMight be worth adding something to the chapter why he didn't feel threatened enough to at least think of the vine yggi. Kept thinking after he ran out of energy, we were gonna see the vine help him out or something. Or was it meant to show our MC isn't entirely helpless without his new power system, because the chi aspect seems quite lacking lately when everything he uses is red sun related
Sparkley Unicorn
2025-01-24 00:34:10 +0000 UTCThis isn't really a spoiler because it's kind of expected, we'll have a blue sun arc in the Two Sun's world, I won't say when but it will happen during his training. The blue sun runes are a different system so I hope everyone likes it, I think it's pretty cool
Kynan
2025-01-23 21:58:42 +0000 UTCAnd I wonder if when he’s able to the two sun fuse and make a purple sun
Mat
2025-01-23 21:52:39 +0000 UTCWhen will he be able to inscribe blue sun ruins
Mat
2025-01-23 21:49:58 +0000 UTC
