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Page 275 (line-work).

I hope you all had a good weekend! This is going to be an easy one to colour, so I’ll be back in no time with the finished result!

Page 275 (line-work).

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I didn't really think about what unit it might have been exalted from, maybe it was a digging unit. I really loved the design of the snake from this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5cwoup-e0lc I liked the idea of a snake with arms and figured that maybe giving it mammalian traits could make the design more interesting. I think a way to get around the space travel problem with large size with an Over-Father would be to make them INTO a spaceship. I really like the idea of detachable armor segments/drones! I figured something like that might allow them to shapeshift. What do you think?

Erika Spooner

That’s perhaps a story for another day. Hmm that could look interesting,what do you imagine the unit this over-father was exalted froms function was, why is it a wyrm in your mind? Perhaps to dig tunnels like those giant worms in the hobbit? I think it couldn’t hurt to be large, just not too large because it makes space-travel more difficult. As for the swarm idea, I think we’re betting a little far away from what an Over-father really is. Perhaps an Over-fathers could utilise a swarm of detachable armour segments in the way similar to what you mentioned, that could be good!

Callum Diggle

He’s an absolute chad

Callum Diggle

How did Janudua get their scar? Do you think the serpent design for an Over-Father should have back legs and arms? It would make it look like an eastern dragon though, but maybe that'd be an interesting design choice. Maybe their helmet could make it look like they have a snout or something. Do you think an alternative Over-Father should be very large to be imposing to species like the Kolaxans and to have more muscle mass and things like psionic nodes? Do you think a good Over-Father design could be a swarm of small module organisms that connect to each other to make a very large creature but can split up to overwhelm opponents?

Erika Spooner

Honestly, though, he would've made a great salesman if he were born in today's world.

Justin Huynh

uthipidus the GOAT

Miningation

Haha I’m glad the tone came across alright

Callum Diggle

Not quite, Uthipidus picked the best dialogue option 😂 that’ll become clear on the next page though

Callum Diggle

Thanks so much man, it’s a tough one to pull off!

Callum Diggle

He sure did!

Callum Diggle

True! I read that too!

Gabu

He read the room right!

Gabu

"Uthipidus!", lol

Justin Huynh

like that even tho he has no lips, the eyes alone make it look like he's smiling. great work Callum!

sinfulsaint

Uh oh…I sense rising tensions

SlenderEnderGuy


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