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Some new stuff

I started the Amathea story, created a new heroine (no peril, wanted some feedback first), and did a short scene. I'll continue with Amathea and Nylon Lynx.  Next update in a few days and I will be charging for the month.

Thanks!

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Thanks for the feedback. She has a body tattoo to partially cover her up so she doesn't look entirely naked. Good points, part of the fun is the helplessness of the heroine, including having various items taken from them while they are subdued.

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Amathea really needs to work on her people-reading skills. And about Phase... it's a fun concept, but in my opinion, it kind of takes a bit of the thrill out of peril. I mean, even with the skimpier outfits and general lack of reaction the girls have to being stripped, a large part of the fun of peril is the girls being stripped- or forced to strip- against their will. Phase going into whatever she gets involved in knowing ahead of time knowing that her power will take off her clothes just isn't as appealing to me. That's how I see it. Unless, of course, she's more along the lines of a thief or spy, not a crimefighter. It's one thing to get caught, but getting caught naked, even if just by some bystanders? That can be fun too. Though she seems to have kept some form of lingerie in that last picture.

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