[Salvos] 73. Going on a Trip (Removed for KU)
Added 2021-02-16 05:24:28 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
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The leader of the Valiant Dreamers Company stopped before me, nodding back at the Level 38 [Archer] and the Level 35 [Mage] with him. Correction “[Mage] with her”
Story Seeker
2021-02-22 09:39:44 +0000 UTCI like world building but sometimes you can do it right. Like have a noobie around so there’s a reason they are going in-depth.
ShotoGun
2021-02-17 02:39:04 +0000 UTCSalvos is such a rollercoaster; one moment I'm slack jawed at her maturity, and the next I want to tear my hair out. Personal opinion: it's better to leave hints and let things be mysterious sometimes rather than expand for world building, for example when the two silvers discussed joining other companies. No one would elaborate so much about a topic both parties are clearly familiar with (like about the undead), people don't talk like that and in this case it's immersion breaking.
Redbeard
2021-02-16 20:37:54 +0000 UTC"but the best ones we have{ }in the Eastern Kingdoms" - just need an "are" in there.
J
2021-02-16 17:02:05 +0000 UTCAlthough If the silvers ever tell Salvos I can definitely see her leaving them to fight a horde of monsters to be nice to them
Wolfclaw
2021-02-16 07:28:01 +0000 UTCThis is hilarious. We have two angsty silver rank adventurers playing the part of the head strong teenagers wanting to act all grown up and Daniel and Salvos hovering over them overprotectively in the roll of helicopter moms.
Melting Sky
2021-02-16 06:52:35 +0000 UTCThats genius, well played xD
Lars Nieuwenhuis
2021-02-16 06:40:09 +0000 UTCDaniel has a [Hero] complex 😂
Gavriel
2021-02-16 05:47:30 +0000 UTC
