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[Salvos] 75. Giant Ape (Removed for KU)

(Removed for KU)

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I dont get it? Can u explain pls. Ty :3

Falxie

Kinda ironic that the top web fiction page forces one to lie about being HUMAN (disgusting)

Lowe K. Lyesmith

"Defeat{ed} [Prima Saeve Progenitor]!" - Just need to add "ed" to "Defeat", and during Salvos's speech "tumulous" should probably be "tumultuous"

J

Thank you! So close to #1!

MelasD

Congrats on already being the number 4 on Top Web Fiction!

Lars Nieuwenhuis

An opportune time that this level up could've happened was when Salvos was reading all those [cult] books for a week. Some opportunities for large funny sounding words Salvos slips in when bonding with Rachel. Though I'm loathed to have any of that changed as it was very very cute.

Yeno Memevig

Thanks for the chapter! About Salvos' increased vocabulary gag: had no issues, thought it was fun. I do think it has potential for a long running gag for her though if it was first built up a bit. Maybe Salvos increased her [Universal Language Comprehension] skill to lvl.2 and started slowly adding obscure graduate level vocab in casual conversations leading up to this. Could lead to more misunderstandings about her being an actual noble and it contrasts well with her childish personality. Just a suggestion! Keep up the good work

Yeno Memevig

thank you!

MelasD

AH

MelasD

[Midday Changeling – Lvl. 51] -> [Zelus Imp – Lvl. 52] Gained 5 Stat Points and 3 Skill Points! Subspecies [Midday Changeling] Level Up! [Midday Changeling – Lvl. 52] -> [Zelus Imp – Lvl. 53] I didn't know Changelings could devolve upon Leveling 😜

Gavriel

Man, I wish a had a tenth of your productivity while flying. Thanks for the chapters!

Flying Goat

[Universal Language Comprehension] :P

MelasD

Where the hell did Salvos get those words from?

CryoHydra357


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