[Salvos] 75. Giant Ape (Removed for KU)
Added 2021-02-18 00:27:43 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
Comments
I dont get it? Can u explain pls. Ty :3
Falxie
2021-02-18 18:59:31 +0000 UTCKinda ironic that the top web fiction page forces one to lie about being HUMAN (disgusting)
Lowe K. Lyesmith
2021-02-18 17:25:12 +0000 UTC"Defeat{ed} [Prima Saeve Progenitor]!" - Just need to add "ed" to "Defeat", and during Salvos's speech "tumulous" should probably be "tumultuous"
J
2021-02-18 15:20:55 +0000 UTCThank you! So close to #1!
MelasD
2021-02-18 10:34:54 +0000 UTCCongrats on already being the number 4 on Top Web Fiction!
Lars Nieuwenhuis
2021-02-18 06:39:50 +0000 UTCAn opportune time that this level up could've happened was when Salvos was reading all those [cult] books for a week. Some opportunities for large funny sounding words Salvos slips in when bonding with Rachel. Though I'm loathed to have any of that changed as it was very very cute.
Yeno Memevig
2021-02-18 03:29:41 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! About Salvos' increased vocabulary gag: had no issues, thought it was fun. I do think it has potential for a long running gag for her though if it was first built up a bit. Maybe Salvos increased her [Universal Language Comprehension] skill to lvl.2 and started slowly adding obscure graduate level vocab in casual conversations leading up to this. Could lead to more misunderstandings about her being an actual noble and it contrasts well with her childish personality. Just a suggestion! Keep up the good work
Yeno Memevig
2021-02-18 03:23:42 +0000 UTCthank you!
MelasD
2021-02-18 02:49:37 +0000 UTCAH
MelasD
2021-02-18 02:35:36 +0000 UTC[Midday Changeling – Lvl. 51] -> [Zelus Imp – Lvl. 52] Gained 5 Stat Points and 3 Skill Points! Subspecies [Midday Changeling] Level Up! [Midday Changeling – Lvl. 52] -> [Zelus Imp – Lvl. 53] I didn't know Changelings could devolve upon Leveling 😜
Gavriel
2021-02-18 02:25:53 +0000 UTCMan, I wish a had a tenth of your productivity while flying. Thanks for the chapters!
Flying Goat
2021-02-18 02:11:17 +0000 UTC[Universal Language Comprehension] :P
MelasD
2021-02-18 00:40:58 +0000 UTCWhere the hell did Salvos get those words from?
CryoHydra357
2021-02-18 00:38:48 +0000 UTC
