[Salvos] 83. Observations (Removed for KU)
Added 2021-02-25 10:32:43 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
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It's kind of unclear who's saying what in the dialogue sequence starting with “Anything stands out to you?”
EchoingRuby
2021-02-26 04:13:10 +0000 UTC"Every Gatho Mammoth, Ground Craver, and Rancor{s}" - Rancor should be singular like the others for consistency. Also in the last bit, "the Brilsum{'s} Ruins", I'd recommend to either go with "the Brilsum Ruins" or "Brilsum's ruins".
J
2021-02-25 14:31:31 +0000 UTCShould take out the sleeping monsters while the mind reapers are bringing back targets
CryoHydra357
2021-02-25 10:42:54 +0000 UTCFirst mwahaha.
Darren Li
2021-02-25 10:34:26 +0000 UTC