[Salvos] 84. Doing Bad Things (Removed for KU)
Added 2021-02-26 06:24:25 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
Comments
"I’m not old enough to be called a Miss all the time by a child like you." - But 'miss', while for an unmarried woman, does imply youth. Edit: "Uh oh, Salvos did an oopsie. She hasn't done one in a while (I think). The last time she did one was when she made the Iron Champion idiots angry!" - In what way is that an oopsie? That was wonderful.
Venalitor
2021-03-13 01:50:29 +0000 UTC"We crested {to} the top" - no need for the "to" here. Only other issue was a type of fucking as "fuckign" when Daniel was cursing.
J
2021-02-26 17:01:00 +0000 UTCPretty sure the wall was in the wrong here, for being so weak, and getting anywhere near Salvos.
Flying Goat
2021-02-26 14:27:41 +0000 UTCSalvos is a cute little baby and she can't ever be wrong. Plus, princess.
Sorry
2021-02-26 10:01:38 +0000 UTCHappy birthday
CryoHydra357
2021-02-26 09:01:54 +0000 UTCNeither are really in the wrong, at least not morally. Although she should generally be a bit more wary and careful, Salvos lacks the experience needed to understand that even if they are still standing, abandoned buildings can be more dangerous and lacking in structural integrity than they might appear. Daniel knows Salvos is inexperienced, but can hardly be expected to walk around warning her about every possible mistake she could make. Sometimes bad luck just happens and people make honest mistakes. You can't really blame Daniel for getting upset given the situation and it's not like he was particularly nasty about it, He backed down and calmed himself almost immediately when he realized Salvos really didn't seem to know this place could come down on top of their heads just by leaning on a wall.
Melting Sky
2021-02-26 09:01:53 +0000 UTC<3 thx
MelasD
2021-02-26 07:31:32 +0000 UTCHappy birthday dood
Devil
2021-02-26 06:51:30 +0000 UTCThe reason why I put all these chaps out as fast as I could is because is my birthday on monday! Don't want to work on my birthday. Happy birthday me! I'll be 21! Yay!
MelasD
2021-02-26 06:26:09 +0000 UTC
