[Salvos] 87. Cultist Scheme (Removed for KU)
Added 2021-03-05 12:53:32 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
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cuz i'd have to take a 3 week break otherwise
MelasD
2021-03-06 04:14:51 +0000 UTCby errors, do you mean typos or other stuff?
MelasD
2021-03-06 04:14:44 +0000 UTCThere are quite a few errors in this chapter, but the one correction I think really needs to be made most is in this phrase. "to the front f his head." To fix the typo and make it parse better you might want to change it to "into his face."
Melting Sky
2021-03-05 17:49:03 +0000 UTCSeriously, why are you still writing chapters during finals? You should focus on your exams.
Melting Sky
2021-03-05 17:43:56 +0000 UTC"Navigating through these overlapping rows of houses{ }exacerbated" - need a "was" inside the {}. Also "front {}f his head" - missing an "o". Finally, "an addition{} (+2) bonus to my" - "addition" to "additional"
J
2021-03-05 13:32:37 +0000 UTC
