[Salvos] 94. Declaration and Introduction (Removed for KU)
Added 2021-03-12 13:08:27 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
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"Daniel had been afraid of what would happen once the Harrowed Vindicators caught up to them. He had thought they would have sent Platinums, Diamonds, maybe even Elites!" - The leaders of the Harrowed Vindicators realized too late their mistake. . . They didn't read the Evil Overlord List. Oh no. . . A seer. I take it this is the one that dissapeared with Daniel then? Well, probably won't be a princess for long though. Edit: Bit convenient she shows up right after the fight though innit? She with the assassins?
Venalitor
2021-03-14 01:19:01 +0000 UTCA freakin' Princess!
Melting Sky
2021-03-12 22:50:38 +0000 UTCWill level 10 weapon proficiency make her an expert with all weapons?
CryoHydra357
2021-03-12 20:58:48 +0000 UTCJust an FYI, the Harrowed Vindicators have fled before. The one who took Rachel hostage escaped after being scarred by Salvos
MelasD
2021-03-12 17:23:22 +0000 UTCThe assassin's are likely associated with Iron Champions (I hope they are) because they started running away from what we've seen or heard the harrowed vindicators don't run away. I do hope they can make it in to help destroy the iron champions.
Crackafilenight
2021-03-12 17:11:15 +0000 UTCGood luck!
MelasD
2021-03-12 15:33:01 +0000 UTC<3
MelasD
2021-03-12 15:32:46 +0000 UTCNow the wait . . . Wish me sanity
Edwin Canarte
2021-03-12 15:27:01 +0000 UTCLoved this chapter! Thank you π
Mislandor
2021-03-12 14:34:00 +0000 UTC"in half, and{ }deep into his chest." - Something like "bit" or "sank" or "cut" is needed here. Also, when Salvos "{grew} ablaze", I'd recommend "lit" instead.
J
2021-03-12 14:20:40 +0000 UTCThank you for doing the read-y stuff!
MelasD
2021-03-12 13:25:41 +0000 UTCThank you for doing the writey stuff!
Lowe K. Lyesmith
2021-03-12 13:25:07 +0000 UTC