[Salvos] 109. Big and Scary Demon (Removed for KU)
Added 2021-04-01 18:31:30 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
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Could you point out which part of the text says that? It must have been a typo, because Edithe is most certainly a Human.
MelasD
2021-04-03 16:43:19 +0000 UTCI'm confused since when has edithe not been human
Wolfclaw
2021-04-03 16:36:12 +0000 UTCFun chapter. Good pacing.
Exsanguinator
2021-04-01 21:20:35 +0000 UTCI agree with everyone else on the pacing of this chapter being good. Regarding future chapters, for me it depends on how interesting I find what's happening. If it's a big climactic battle, some very important (to the plot) conversation, or something just especially entertaining I probably wouldn't mind it being stretched a bit. Right now they're just going from point A to point B, and you're introducing a character we haven't been made to care a lot about yet, so it makes sense to keep things zippy!
Moosh7
2021-04-01 19:35:41 +0000 UTCNice pace in a nice chapter
Alteron
2021-04-01 19:28:35 +0000 UTCI liked the pacing. Especially since Salvos has been thinking about it bothering her for some time, so there was a nice build up to her actually saying it out loud.
Lictor Magnus
2021-04-01 19:08:17 +0000 UTCI would also say that this chapter goes to the point, and I think that's great. While I do enjoy reading long and slow proceedings, sometimes you "know" what's gonna happen and you just want it to happen instead of dragging on and on.
Turtle Galacticus
2021-04-01 18:47:41 +0000 UTCWhew. Honestly, this chapter took longer than one of my usual chapters because, uh, I had to keep deleting scenes I added for no reason. Poor Daniel lost half his screen time XD
MelasD
2021-04-01 18:38:59 +0000 UTCIt fits really well, lots of information, but clear and concisely written. Nice!
Lars Nieuwenhuis
2021-04-01 18:38:01 +0000 UTC
