[Melas] Chapter 67: Next Step (Taken down for KU)
Added 2020-10-06 22:43:50 +0000 UTCTaken down for KU
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Little folk sounds like fairies rather than halflings for me for example
Faiir
2020-10-17 08:59:00 +0000 UTCI think halfling's the only one I'd recognize. There are some suggestions here but I'm not sure if any are good https://www.reddit.com/r/worldbuilding/comments/71660s/alternate_names_for_halflings/?utm_source=amp&utm_medium=&utm_content=comments_view_all
Faiir
2020-10-17 08:58:02 +0000 UTCUhhh do you have any suggestions? My mind is drawing a blank right now, although that’s probably because it’s 2am
MelasD
2020-10-17 08:54:16 +0000 UTCHobbit is copyrighted by Tolkien estate and I heard they go after people using it hard - you may want to use a different name for your halflings.
Faiir
2020-10-17 08:53:17 +0000 UTCPersonally, I feel like I need to work on my SoL/character interactions a bit more, but hearing that you like it reassures me! :D
MelasD
2020-10-08 20:47:45 +0000 UTCThe dialogues are fine. I wish I could write dialogues like that myself :p
Markus
2020-10-08 18:03:36 +0000 UTC
