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[Salvos] 60. Rachel + Cover Art 3 Preview (Removed for KU)

(Removed for KU)

[Salvos] 60. Rachel + Cover Art 3 Preview (Removed for KU)

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"if it can be {aruged}" - "argued" "why Humans, as {}a master{} of mana" - I'd recommend just going with "as masters of mana" "target her {joins} to" - "joints"

J

I think he might be about Salvos

Heriaks

Bro wait that last line made me think. He might be talking about Salvos, or someone he knew from Earth, maybe he had a kid or little sister? Probably Salvos cause he doesn't seem very upset about abandoning anyone, unless whoever sent him there said he'd go back when he died or something.

Ethan Flohr

Thank you! Yeah, he’s a very talented artist.

MelasD

Haven't read the chapter yet, just wanted to say that the cover art looks really good, even without coloring!

Lars Nieuwenhuis


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