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[Salvos] 212. Stonefort Labyrinth Dungeon (Removed for KU)

(Removed for KU)

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I think I will laugh at lot, if the voice isn't a [Lux Golmi], and is like a child just making a prank or something. Salvos giving a warning shows how much she despise being compared to Wild Demons and that is quite nice if I do say so myself.

Lon

Thanks for the chapter.

Joshua Little

I really like that tidbit about the names for the people of the commune. It's a little thing, but it added an extra layer of depth to their little community. They don't like the nonsense names they've been given, but they're willing to go along with it for the benefit of mutual protection. They're not really friends to each other, but they put up with each other's eccentricities for the sake of their community as a whole, and I think that's an interesting dynamic. I also love that the lux golmi can speak, and isn't just another mindless monster for her to kill without a second thought. I wonder what Salvos will choose to do.

CleanAire

We are a quarter of a year away from Christmas, why the heck is your mom already buying gingerbread?

buca117

Good chap. The Lux Golmi seems a bit too inteligent to just kill. Will Salvos get their spare heart, if she promises to not give it away the very next day? (Chrismas is approaching. My Mom allready brought gingerbread, so that joke is approquiate) Finally Salvos can flex all that hide and seek training she did with Lily

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