[Salvos] 214. Enigmatic Heart (Removed for KU)
Added 2021-09-24 12:02:03 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
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I kinda disliked this chapter. This was one of the first times that Salvos had to make a choice between being moral, and what she wanted. Aaand then there was a cop out. Either she sticks by her ethos, and doesn't hurt/kill intelligent beings who aren't attacking her. Or she does, because at the end of the day she's a demon who will take what she wants even if its hurting someone else. I was really looking forward to this choice for the past couple chapters to see which way her character development went. To the point I just paid for Patreon access cus I couldn't wait anymore (plus least I can do is pay a few bucks for a story I like). Instead there was some gibberish about mind magic that confused the buildup to this golem being a non-agressive sapient creature that just wanted to live. Then we get to keep liking Salvos because she didn't kill them all, while still getting her regrowth ingredient.
Notcreepycreeper
2021-10-26 17:30:57 +0000 UTCAww but I wanted Daniel's interlude. Anyhow I liked how it ended the last ingredient for the potion, Salvos didn't kill precious companions of others and she got what she wanted. I wonder if people will end up asking her if she don't have more than one shard or if she can give the place location. Though I doubt she would do that.
Lon
2021-10-04 02:20:25 +0000 UTCGreat chappy, well done Salvos, glad you didn't fight. Thanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2021-09-26 02:44:14 +0000 UTCLove it!
AlyxHaestrom
2021-09-24 20:17:56 +0000 UTCNicely done, I love the consistent reasoning between Salvos's dealings with both the Gremlin, and the Golem. Their reasoning was similar, but Salvos opted for a gentler approach against the Golem since it was willing to understand compromise, rather than acting selfishly.
WingedIkaros
2021-09-24 16:17:49 +0000 UTCexcellent resolution.
Adam Daw
2021-09-24 15:35:15 +0000 UTCI hope lux shows up again. 8)
Zageron
2021-09-24 14:50:53 +0000 UTCsalvos went to the monster commune, got frustrated, and figured that the inly way to get what she wants with monsters is to act like those demons that choose to act wild. then she barges into the golem lair and through mind magic empathy figures thats mean, but still effective extorts what shes wants out of the golem
Kane Carmichael
2021-09-24 14:39:08 +0000 UTCdid salvos truely learn something here? maybe a little bit. youknow, it might of been an idea to have spent even more time here.
Kane Carmichael
2021-09-24 14:36:38 +0000 UTCEven if it had managed to kill her, she would have easily killed tens if not hundreds of its children. It did what it did because it was afraid the other golems would die
CleanAire
2021-09-24 14:24:09 +0000 UTCNooooo I want the next Daniel interlude
T
2021-09-24 14:17:57 +0000 UTCI like that there was a good resolution, but it did seem like the lux golmi agreed to something by really risky for itself maybe a bit too quickly. Since it was so much higher leveled than salvos it seems reasonable to me that it would have been more like “I can just kill you why should I trust you”. Maybe it’s mind magic enabled it to understand her intentions?
Elle
2021-09-24 14:17:44 +0000 UTCsad, want more salvos no interludes :(
Tjark
2021-09-24 13:49:56 +0000 UTCThat was a scary thought, Salvos playing God and deciding who gets to live as long as her goals are met. Then came a nice solution to a desperate problem :) pace felt like the last chapters
Mantiqore
2021-09-24 13:14:37 +0000 UTCWell
CallOut4
2021-09-24 12:06:45 +0000 UTC
