[Salvos] 128. Catching Up (Removed for KU)
Added 2021-05-01 22:22:21 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
Comments
Thanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2021-06-13 10:03:16 +0000 UTCSo. . . Go lich, make fren now? . .
Venalitor
2021-05-04 03:05:30 +0000 UTCHow could Alex Cromerth, member of the Vaun Qiuer Empire’s elite Swordsguard Forces, be forgotten just like that D:
Seri
2021-05-02 13:34:38 +0000 UTCI had the comedy tag. People complained. So I removed it. /shrug
MelasD
2021-05-02 08:13:23 +0000 UTCI will say you should add a light-hearted or comedy tag to the story. The story's basically been written like a comedy film for a while now. I think I'll be dropping it after this month mostly due to that. When reading the title and tags on RoyalRoad it comes off as.. well, a monster evolution litrpg, but she's evolved once in the last like 100 chapters and it's not done basically anything for her besides stats because she's a changeling.. who doesn't do anything you'd think changelings would do. She's terrible at understanding humans, which you'd think would be a basic part of being a being that walks among other races. She's not infiltrated anything or changed human forms from one female to another person or any of that. I'm not sure what her being a changeling is even about other than to facilitate her being able to walk around in human towns, which isn't even a big part of the story. Seems like the "monster evolution litrpg" part is missing. I applaud your insane work ethic, especially while going to classes and shit, but the story just isn't what I thought it'd be anymore. Was hoping it'd evolve and mature more but.. it hasn't. Seems like it's written for kids
ZaA
2021-05-02 08:11:58 +0000 UTCSeriously bad idea. Unless Salvos actually has some sort of information on the thing, it would be beyond foolish to spit in the eye of the bear. The Lich by its very nature will be a godly sentient magic-user and its level could be pretty much anywhere from like 100 to 1000.
Melting Sky
2021-05-02 02:28:02 +0000 UTC
