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[Salvos] 145. Revelations (Removed for KU)

(Removed for KU)

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Don't worry @MelasD you got something going here with the kobolds reveal. It also give our main character drive to get stronger in her class. which means ACADEMY ARC!!!!🥳🥳🥳🥳

mightguyishot

Also, is rather the author focus on a few groups of people and do their story well than throw in more species because “its cool” and stretch the story to thin n loose it's substance.

mightguyishot

Also it makes perfect sense that summoning is the integral “evil” in the stories! It has been affected by all our main characters! And it would make sense the urgency of the kobolds to do something. I don't think they care about humans or seem evil enough to be scheming all the time. At least some factions. I like that the story isn't good vs evil, that everyone is working towards their own needs n desires. It gives characters depth instead of dumb tags like: good guy, bad guy, evil. People are complex and so are the kobolds

mightguyishot

I don't agree! Why would an entire species cottle to humans for centuries for a few boosts? And why we're the faries against the pact? I feel like spirits are not as innocent and helpful as they seem. Their working too hard for a species that does NOTHING for them.

mightguyishot

I hope the kobalds are wrong. But in an entirely meta way. Summons are part of what make your world fun and you’ve barely even scratched the surface of the possibilitys. In fact Id say one of my major criticisms of this story is we haven’t seen nearly enough variety in classes dispite them being present. Partially because everything gets simplified to archetype, or PvE. But its like a major tentpole of your world that is very neglected

Docnox

That was good! It ties everything together n all our main cast. Good job! Didn't see it coming!!!

mightguyishot

It's plant monsters so I think they fall into a grey area.

Lothspell

shouldnt it be [Hearthkeeper of Flora] not Fauna if she’s controlling plants?

Oliver Wolfe

Thanks for the chapter! Hope they’re wrong but it makes sense.

Oliver Wolfe

D'oh, stupid humans always have to eventually ruin everything they touch.

Melting Sky

Personally I hope that it's speculation and we find out the Kobolds have been wrong all this time.

Jonathan

Thanks for the chapter.

Joshua Little


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