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[Salvos] 274. Risk and Reward (Removed for KU)

(Removed for KU)

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Oh damn her rival got a grand skill before her.

Lon

By the way was that a team four star dragon ball abridged reference I saw in this chapter.

Precursor

Maybe a nod to the progenitor centinal, it seems like ancient is just a class of very rare and powerful centinal, where progenitor is singular and pairs with the "her children"

Robert Burchette

fixed it

MelasD

Just want to point out that you have been calling Willy "she" and "he" interchangeably in this chapter and the previous one as well, I think. Unless it's a gender fluid Spirit, I'm throughly confused 😅.

lKutts

Nice I like this one :) Hope that evolved Sentinel suvives

hhhhhuie

"He'd seen her suffering - from the loss of her children." Now that's interesting. Is there perhaps a more to the Ancient Centinel than it seems?

Sanja-G

“What? No— the Title Centinel is mine.” Is title supposed to be titan?

Log Daniels

Thanks for the chapter.

Joshua Little

New patron btw can anyone tell me the expected schedule i know you just had a break (10$ patreon) :)

kfir with a כ

I hope the centinel getting a grand skill before her hurt salvos' pride which will lead her to get her own prideful grand skill

kfir with a כ

It’s Salvo of Vanity.

MelasD

Unrelated question, is the skill [Salvo of Vanity] or [Salvos of Vanity]? You’ve written it as “Salvo” nearly everytime, there was one chapter where you write it as “Salvos” forget which though. I think Salvos of Vanity makes more sense

They’re all [Evolved Centinels], but I forgot to give the Titan Centinel an extra prefix. Will edit it when I get out of bed. The [Evolved Centinel] at the end is the Sage Centinel which escaped Salvos a few chapters back.

MelasD

When Salvos defeats the Titan Centinel the notification said she defeated the lvl 131 Evolved Centinel instead (which can’t be right because of that epilogue)

Good chapter :) I held hopes for a Disney princess companion/sidekick since Lily, I hope willy ends up the one :D. but I had the feeling we established that willy was male somewhere. Maybe not, idk

Daryl Piffre

OOOOH [Grand Skill] fight!

Shelbo

Well, that's just mean. A Centinel getting a grand skill before Salvos?

Lowe K. Lyesmith


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