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[Salvos] 318. Time for a Talk (Removed for KU)

(Removed for KU)

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Thanks!

David Johnson

Fixed!

MelasD

316 and 317 appear to be missing from the $3 tier.

David Johnson

Chapters like this should be nostalgic, swift, funny n to the point. Great job👍 especially loved centina trying to woo headmaster clayton🤣🤣🤣 if I was offered an entire filler chapter of their awkward back n forth I would be satisfied. To be a flaw of a wall on their first date😌

mightguyishot

I liked the pacing. Was going through things quite fast, but I don't think it would have felt better to be stuck reading about people being gathered for a week, and the pace makes sense within the narrative because salvos is salvos.

Chris Lewis

Kinda feels like someone skipping through cutscenes as soon as there able in a video game to get to the game play, this was mostly just gathering ppl so I'd rather it done quickly but it's also still just an entire chapter of gathering people.... but other people found this funny, so I guess it was fine? I kinda grew up with south park and other adult swim shows so my humor is kinda, hm.... crackheady? Extreme? A little dark? So I didn't find this as funny as others but I guess that's a me thing. I mean, I have smiled at lighter forms of comedy but, this wasn't it for me. I would have preferred just a short time skip of salvos coming back dragging a buncha confused, unwilling participants

R3IsL

Time to pick up Edithe and her all star adventures from the companies and Saffron and the rest of the vampires and that Druid guard and kill Belzu. Does Salvos get an evolution with her Nexeus Mystic class at level 100 or a 2nd class?

Ah I really cant wait until the "I got adopted" line and Daniel's reaction.

Eric

Poor Veronica is the only one left out :D

Ivactheseeker

I totally forgot about them! Maybe they're just not participating in the meeting since Hope was so traumatized?

Sanja-G

The pacing fells quite quick to me. But since Salvos is hurrying everything actively along it makes sense and the parts where she is absent contrast nicely.

Sanja-G

Agreed

Ivactheseeker

It's over clayton, centina has her claws in you.

Yeno Memevig

The pacing is a bit fast, but very Salvos. This is a very Salvos way to do things.

Veronica Francesca Davis

Mooooore

Tanner Porter

It's like if the Justice League were led by Deadpool. Chaotic good figure from another universe.

luda305

Salvos isn't a Demon, she's Salvos.

Archaon

Wasn't there another prince and princess with the rebellion? Princess Hope and Prince... something-or-other? What happened to them?

Matt.Silver

Not going to lie, this chapter was a lot of fun to read.

Kitty Chan

I'm digging it

Benjamin Lipken

Thanks for the chapter.

Joshua Little

Good pacing and a fun chapter!

Viedu

the pacing was good on this! it was fast, but i think it was appropriate as we're reaching the climax and it's sort of like all the pieces falling into place. I definitely wouldn't want to breeze through defeating Belzu like this since that's what we've been building up to for so long - I want to savor it. but I liked it for getting us to this next good part. thanks for the chapter! excited to see how it all unfolds!

Elle

The pacing is good

Rd Zg

Who ever said there had to be one [Hero]? Anyways, Salvos is in a [Hero]ic duo with Daniel, except he is actually the [Sidekick].

Bunny Waffles

Avengers assemble…around Salvos!

Tyler smalley

The pacing is excellent for salvos on seriousness

Bri

Dude I am laughing so much. Salvos just pulled people and was real casual about solving their problem. Poor Valda she will probably learn next chapter that Daniel is the [Hero] but it will be fine since Salvos will most likely say that he can't win against her.

Lon

Thank for the chapter. The end of this chapter make Salvos look serious........... BUT, we know that Salvos CAN'T be SERIOUS....

Azgaroth

The pacing was nice.

Lon

Ha I like the Clayton and Centia interactions

Shelbo

Great as always!

Khaled

Is salvos going to reveal she is a Demon to the public anytime soon ?

ZelTheUnbroken

I like

Dolus

12s

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