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[Salvos] 650. Goat (Removed for KU)

(Removed for KU)

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See him in 200 chapters making kit-kat pose)

Den

Feels like the first sentence is not finished: “a power so rare that most of Humankind, and all the other Species in Nexeus.. But that wasn’t what the [Hero] from Earth’s attention was focused on.”

Kármán Levente

„Nah Id win“ Bro is clearly Gojo

Chrisbirdie

They are indeed incredibly similar.

Danijel Turina

“Four isn’t a lot. I would have had five right now if I didn’t learn that having too many would cause a little bit of a problem when you reach Level 200.” That really is Salvos half a year after reuniting with Haec, isn't it?

Dragonmaster_42

The thing Yves doesn't get is why Daniel is standing there with his mouth open like a fool. He thinks it's because Yves is so unique and powerful, but it's in fact because he already saw one exactly like that and he's having a deja vu. :)

Danijel Turina

gaping hope = hole, typo

Danijel Turina

I alrdy like the watcher, what a guy 1🤣👏

MaddinYau

Another mistake spotted: She raised an army and steadied herself against the wall. It should be "raised an arm" not an "army."

Sancturillore -- Élie Simard-Wallot

“Although… I don’t really have any questions I’m dying to you, either.” missing the "ask" between "to" and "you."

Sancturillore -- Élie Simard-Wallot

Bro really said that 😭 chapter was really good though. Nice w. Can't wait to see what happens with Daniel. Is he gonna have a nah I'd win moment too?

Azrie

Yv/es

MelasD

Bro said “Nah, I’d win” it’s so over

heh

28s

Captdeth

He’s the GOAT

XKARNATION


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