[Amelia] The Level Zero Hero Chapter 219 (Removed for KU)
Added 2024-01-19 21:23:06 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
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Amelieez nutz
Actus
2024-01-21 11:19:01 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Jonathan Willis
2024-01-20 14:36:03 +0000 UTCMassaging temples and pinching the bridge of their nose is getting a bit old too. :)
Danijel Turina
2024-01-20 08:34:30 +0000 UTCI don't understand why Edlyn would be afraid of Amelia. Sure, Amelia is strong, but Edlyn is a cook; everybody with a combat class would always be stronger than her and could theoretically kill her on a whim, but that's not a valid reason to be scared of them. Maybe it made sense in the beginning when she wasn't sure how balanced and reliable Amelia is, but obviously nobody else is scared of her so it would be reasonable to conclude she's perfectly safe.
Danijel Turina
2024-01-20 07:09:46 +0000 UTCI feel like"he/she gritted their teeth" is overused in your writing, maybe some variety in how people show frustration would be good
Superduck50
2024-01-20 04:20:19 +0000 UTCHaha love how Edlyn is still terrified of talking to Amelia
Darkdragon
2024-01-20 02:30:46 +0000 UTC4hr
Captdeth
2024-01-20 01:40:46 +0000 UTCIt was nice to see Edlyn be happy until she wasn't. Rip. Chapter was nice. Jax really is a battle junky though lmao.
Azrie
2024-01-19 21:36:20 +0000 UTC