[Salvos] 549. Endless Expanse (Removed for KU)
Added 2023-03-15 09:21:52 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
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I guess if the ceiling is another floor then it's stalagmites on both sides. Not that such a thing makes sense, but hey.
Danielv123
2023-03-16 06:37:36 +0000 UTCYeah make one showing everything going on in the mortal realm!
BlackFire13th
2023-03-16 04:07:18 +0000 UTCIf you need to take a break you should take it :) I am pretty sûre a lot of your readers like me would prefer for you to remain in good health !
Vg7
2023-03-16 01:25:07 +0000 UTCDon’t let the corruption get to you as well! Maybe try writing another side story to mix things up? Either way I’m loving the chapters so make sure to look after yourself first :)
Pablo
2023-03-15 17:11:08 +0000 UTCgood chappie
Isley
2023-03-15 16:59:47 +0000 UTCTake a couple weeks. Lots of writers do.
Notcreepycreeper
2023-03-15 16:22:42 +0000 UTCIf you gotta take a break, you gotta take a break. Burnout is a slow, insidious foe. I’d rather have a gap in posts from you now than risk you not being able to post at all later on.
Pantheon
2023-03-15 14:02:44 +0000 UTC“… instead, it attack me.” Attack -> Attacked?
jayu
2023-03-15 12:26:31 +0000 UTCHamburger
Melone
2023-03-15 11:45:13 +0000 UTC1hr
Captdeth
2023-03-15 11:01:09 +0000 UTCOur first descriptive look at demonic architecture and it's something straight out of Inception and the trippy not at all helped by the corruption trying to unexist the entire city. I fuckin' love it. It's so surreal, especially the city also sitting on the ceiling. Also hurray, for more levels for Salvos. Her DE GS should be ready any time now, if not already.
Ihaxlikenoob
2023-03-15 09:44:15 +0000 UTCChapter was great. Enjoyed the city descriptions quite a lot. Sad on the end. Thought it was ally :(
Azrie
2023-03-15 09:38:00 +0000 UTCBurnout sounds bad. And the quality of your stories will be a result of that, then. Take a break or something
EsZeus
2023-03-15 09:37:07 +0000 UTCBurnout is no good. Been there done that. Have you tried doing puzzles? Chapter is great though! Was space magic used in the construction of this layer? I've had the thought that this entire palace is built "outwards" towards the void. Also, stalactites hang from the ceiling, stalagmites sit on the floor.
Matt Cannon
2023-03-15 09:34:52 +0000 UTC
