[Salvos] 684. Conversation (Removed for KU)
Added 2024-04-28 08:07:24 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
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I feel like I come across like I'm nagging. That's not my intention. Let me explain the mindset I have when reading Salvos: I read the chapters, soak in the experience, think what I think is good, what I would change and how I can apply this to my own writing. The Salvos books are amazing and manage to really draw me in, draw me into Salvos' world. It might be the natural conclusion of reading the chapters with time in between instead of back-to-back, but the chapters at the moment rarely manage to create this experience to this exceptional degree. And I hope that by giving my experience and (hopefully constuctive) critizism, I can help make Salvos even better. I really admire your work, MelasD. Salvos is at least in my top 3 stories, maybe even my favorite. That's why I have this overwhelming itch to immerse myself in the story even more!
Dragonmaster_42
2024-04-28 12:43:06 +0000 UTCFinally, the reunion Rachel has been working towards, at least in a way. But I feel like it was just the setup. To be honest, I wouldn't mind waiting a bit longer if the chapters were longer, a full meal instead of an appetizer so to speak. Don't get me wrong I want as much Salvos as often as possible. That said, I feel like it would be more satisfying to combine 2-3 current chapter into one interwoven package. I feel like that would be more satisfying for us as reader and would also allow you, MelasD, to explore a bit more / immerse us and yourself in the situation. I hope this makes sense and doesn't read like glibberish... ;)
Dragonmaster_42
2024-04-28 12:22:14 +0000 UTCLies for kids: it will be dangerous. They just teleported
Użytkownik Przeciętny
2024-04-28 08:33:11 +0000 UTCThis is the first time Salvos in any form has interacted with Rachel in /years/ (both RL and in-story). It's been a long time coming and I'm all for it. She really does deserve this talk.
Ihaxlikenoob
2024-04-28 08:19:20 +0000 UTCNgl, felt so bad for Rachel. At least Sally is there. As for the rest of the thonks; now we wait.
Azrie
2024-04-28 08:16:45 +0000 UTC
