Jump into the Deep End (Revisioned) #1

The title might seem familiar, it was the name of two scenes that started particularly well, but vanished just as quickly. In hindsight, I think it was because I ran into some taste problems, particularly her hips felt quite odd when I tried to move onto the next size. If I wasn't doing this revision, I would've probably shown all of that by now. Her face was also an issue, it was... weirdly exaggerated? And her growing lips didn't make it any better. Besides the visual aspect I also ran into problems with the story and where to take it next. ...Technically I still do, but a lot of it has been resolved with this revision.

This revision is basically a retelling of the same story with some minor tweaks to facilitate the flashback scenes and having the story moved backwards four years. Mainly because that makes her size much more special, making Millie the first person to really grow to those sizes. Hopefully you'll understand the reasoning behind that by reading the entries. The two scenes that currently exists will receive a visual revision as well, to fit Millie's new design. But I intend on keeping things mostly the same.

Like with Susan, I will be separating this into parts. I would've loved to add scenes of the next size (the one beyond the two original), but it seems like that's not going to happen. Sadly I don't have the continuous drive to work on something this extensive for that long. But without further ado, the story!

Drive link

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Millie could barely hold back her excitement to return to the workforce. She expected to work during most of the surrogacy she had done for her best friend, but it knocked her out of the race halfway through. It wasn’t the best impression she had left for the office job she had been with for the past couple of years. Which in turn made Millie even more fired up for work.

Immediately upon arrival, she noticed things were… different. Besides the obvious glances from her colleagues after seeing her bust doubled again since her previous appearance, the atmosphere felt a lot more stale. There were some faces she didn’t recognize either. When the colleagues weren’t distracted, they had a lot less ‘pep’ in their work. It whittled down her excitement a bit, but her cheerful self could not be contained.

She didn’t even reach her desk before a colleague she knew well took a moment to talk to her. To warn Millie that there have been new management hires and that they were extremely keen on performance. Not too long after she got called in by the mentioned new hires.

While they acknowledged her performance was in the top quarter of employees, back before her maternity leave, they found other reasons to doubt the value she brought to the company. Her quick wit allowed her to come up with solid counter-arguments, but they weren’t having any of it. As if it was set in stone even before she walked through the door.

That very same day Millie had to pack up her desk and leave the company for good. While they were generous with their terms, it felt extremely dirty for them to fire her like that. She would probably have a solid basis to sue them, sadly she didn’t have the money nor the effort required to do so. She’d much rather move on and find some place else to work, to have the money necessary to take care of her daughter.