The Masquerade Ball | ASMR [A role-play between lovers ]
Added 2017-04-17 14:53:21 +0000 UTC
Hey all!!
Hola from the whest!!
This is a piece that is set to some music...hopefully some of you may find it hot...and it is a little on the hot side for this type of audio...
This particular one probably won't see outside of Patreon! I hope you enjoy!!
it is essentially a role-play between two lovers
The winner of the draw is Jackie Sunshine!
Happy Monday!
Wish it was longer π₯π
2021-11-18 04:08:14 +0000 UTC
Has any one else kind of zoned out and his voice become a background noise then realize a few minutes later but have no clue where you go to because you don't know the time card where you've zoned out? Just me?
2019-11-26 05:54:30 +0000 UTC
I really like the one with music ... especially because the selected music is alsways so beautiful and fitting. Actually I'm a bit sad that the audios here on patreon didn't end with the lovely tune they do on youtube;) ...
2019-10-22 20:17:27 +0000 UTC
Intense, breathtaking, mindblowing...
2017-12-14 08:40:12 +0000 UTC
Greetings, Ready! Welcome to the community!<br><br>Probably the closest thing Gael does to requests are personal audios (PAs), which are approx. 12-20 min long recordings about a topic of your choice. Currently the only way to get a PA is to win one in a weekly/monthly draw if you are in the $3 tier. He currently hopes to get around to all $3 tier Patrons eventually, so although there may be a bit of a wait, it is possible to get your own personal audio. π
2017-04-19 02:50:53 +0000 UTC
oh wow is there supposed to be a part two to this? it was very sexy wow lost my breath a couple of times..you have my full attention gael. Thanks for the morning surprise..and do u do request at all?
2017-04-18 16:59:39 +0000 UTC
Today is fighting off a headache while aligning risk assessment ratings. This is as fascinating as you might think. Iβm also listening to the "I Hate My Boss" podcast, which is awesome and full of info. But I'm secretly pining for Seanie's erotic audio. π #seanie'sgrrls
2017-04-18 15:28:46 +0000 UTC
What are all you sirens up to today?
I'm trying to translate pet food. Somehow a certain Gaelic speaking person whispering in your ear does not combine well with balanced recipes for shiny coats:
'Oh, your hot, wet juices ...'
- Make sure to see your vet for a course of treatment.
'Don't worry, no one can see your face'
- If you spot any red or inflamed skin, it might be down to the fact that they have a food allergy or intolerance.
Ehrrr.
2017-04-18 15:17:59 +0000 UTC
Greetingssss, FrΓ€ulein Kathy....
2017-04-18 13:43:21 +0000 UTC
This thread just needs a big hug. I don't want anyone uncomfortable or to feel icky for any reason. This Patreon is my fun place and things her have taken quite an awkward turn. I suppose it's bound to happen from time to time with the group expanding. Just wanted to say let's keep it light and fun hmm?
Sincerely,
Pollyanna πππ
Kathy M
2017-04-18 13:34:27 +0000 UTC
I think I love your Mom too Melissa - that is the best answer ever ππππ. The world would probably be a much better place if we would all just be sluts together and be happy. We might just be too blissed out to kill each other β€οΈ
Have you guys heard about that protest movement in Texas related to concealed carry (of guns) on college campuses? It's a student movement called "Cocks Not Glocks" and students are walking around with giant dildos strapped to their back packs to protest concealed carry on campus. It's fecking brilliant. Only problem is, that brandishing a dildo in public is illegal in Texas. But carrying a concealed weapon into a collage classroom is not π€. Microcosm of the American view of sex and sexuality, and the glorification of violence in our culture. btw - how would one "brandish" a dildo exactly. I'm having a hilarious laugh thinking about that. I just keep picturing someone getting ready to fence with it πππ
Not looking to start a debate with my fellow Americans on gun rights - I just thought this was hilarious in its absurdity and wanted to share.
2017-04-18 13:10:26 +0000 UTC
Yeah,So I called my 70 yr. Old mom and told her abt the scenarioπ.(Yeah,I can talk abt.this stuff with her). Asked her abt the word slut being used etc. She said to me "They both sound like sluts.Let em be sluts together and be happy!" My Response "I love you mother!" LOL. We always mess with her because she got pregnant before marriage with my older sister and, In the 60's that was frowned upon. She was a rebel.lol. I've said 2 her "Ma,you were hot in the pants huh?. She would say "No,I was drunk!"π she married and had 2 more kids. So, my parents were both slut bags! Lol
2017-04-18 12:51:22 +0000 UTC
Spoiler Alert : Part 2... they go to the hotel room, fuck like rabbits, take off their masks and he asks if she wants to check in with the sitter to make sure their kids go to bed alright... b/c they're a married couple enjoying a bit of fantasy role play! (Okay, so that may be somewhat rooted in a bit of personal fantasy... hehe Hey, I'm 6 pounds away from my cruise weight. You think I'm not gonna have B pick me up at the bar one night?!?!?!?)
Kelly S
2017-04-18 11:33:55 +0000 UTC
Damn Patreon for eating my reply. Here's hoping the third time is the charm! I agree with Trouble here, and I wanted to add my response as well. As someone relatively new here, I haven't really commented on the erotic audios, but after listening to this audio and reading the responses, I felt compelled to respond as well. For me, this audio was really effective. It had so many fantasy elements that just worked well together: seduction by a stranger, the allure of getting caught, the alpha male taking control, getting freaky on the dance floor. All of these pieces together created, for me, a total experience. I understand that some people were offended by the use of the word "slut," but for me it worked. In my mind, it's all about semantics and tone. There are so many other terms that Gael has used over his audios that could be deemed offensive if taken out of context: little girl, bad girl, good girl, dirty girl, little slut, all of these could be seen as objectifying or offensive. Why am I a little girl and not a woman? Why am I bad or dirty or a slut if I like and enjoy sex? Why am I a good girl if I become submissive and do what I am told? To me, these words are neither hurtful nor offensive because Gael's tone and intent do not convey that. In all of the audios I have listened to, including this one, never once have I heard Gael being anything less than respectful. Maybe had he hollered or screamed or been demeaning, then I would be upset and hurt. For me, I have never felt demeaned or ashamed from his audios; quite the opposite, in fact. In listening to his audios and reading the variety of comments everyone has made, I am finding that sex and sexuality are truly personal experiences, and what works for one will certainly not work for another. Would I want to be taken on a dance floor by a drunken stranger in real life? Probably not, but this is fantasy, after all. This should be a safe place where we can learn what we like and what we don't, and isn't the point of fantasy to be something fun and enjoyable? And, I agree with Trouble. It is not fair to become upset with the messenger, the person who is working hard to create a rich variety of fantasy for each person to enjoy. That is an impossible feat, and the fact that he is trying is commendable. But, in the end, as long as he is respectful and is not demeaning or derogatory to anyone, I think we should just cut him a little slack. I am impressed with the positivity of this site, and I, for one, look forward to it continuing that way.
2017-04-18 10:27:26 +0000 UTC
Totally agree! ππ»
2017-04-18 10:06:49 +0000 UTC
Well said trouble π
Gillian Cann
2017-04-18 09:33:23 +0000 UTC
So it is written, so shall it be done.
Catherine
2017-04-18 09:23:10 +0000 UTC
Hmmm.....If I attend your ball, do you promise not to eat me your Highness? π²π³π. I would choose a black satin mask with glittery jewels and small soft feathers on the sides (vegan feathers of course). It would be an exotic, sexy bird mask - reminiscent of a lovely peacock.
2017-04-18 09:16:14 +0000 UTC
As far as the audio goes, PA or not, it was fucking hot. God bless whoever came up with this. I'm only disappointed I didn't get to hear what happened in that hotel room. Me personally, I have never nor do I expect will ever, have sex with someone I'm not in a relationship with. That is the beauty of Galendia, it allows me to experience situations that I never would otherwise, in the safety of a wonderful fantasy world with an amazing character, all very thoughtfully created for us. Fantasy. Not real life. Happy place. β¦.Now on to some less than positive comments about some earlier comments. While I appreciate we are all entitled to our own opinions, a little forethought, respect, and gratitude, for Gael and each other, is expected here. If the description on the post says itβs probably not going to be available outside of Patreon, itβs a pretty safe assumption it was based off someoneβs PA. How would you feel if it was yours and you came in here and saw all this mess? Probably not good. Brigid and Lucy and everyone else for that matter, I adore you all. Having said that, I do feel it is unnecessary to point out a personal offense to a word used literally thousands of times at this point, just because of a single incident and regardless of the original intent. There are only so many words that can be used and this is by far the least offensive I can think of at the moment. As for the white male comments, also completely baseless, unwarranted, and uncalled for. None of us know what the others have been through or are currently going through, but it's a pretty safe bet that we have all seen, dealt with, and are currently dealing with some heavy and unpleasant shit. Let's not make assumptions and throw out words when we have no basis for them. It's rude and malicious. That was so far out of left field I didn't even catch it the first time. I'm not disagreeing in general that there are differences in how that word is used, but the point is Gael and many of the rest of us do not ascribe to those personal philosophies so this is not a place where that conversation is relevant. We are not here to talk about the injustices of the world, nor are we ever going to solve them. If you feel that strongly about it, join a protest, start a movement, take it outside. And just in case there is any doubt about Gael's intentions about being positive, respectful, and ensuring we all feel safe and beautiful, let me clarify. Take it as a fact. Never question it again until he says otherwise. Learn it, live it, love it.
2017-04-18 08:53:30 +0000 UTC
Well... IΒ΄m bored...
Last night provided ssome entertainment at leasst... now itΒ΄s quiet...
I want to assssk a quessstion...
If I would give a masked ball... what masque would you choose?
Ja, you are all invited....(tasty, tender humans....)
2017-04-18 08:01:49 +0000 UTC
Welcome Allie Bee!
2017-04-18 07:54:11 +0000 UTC
Congratulations to Jackie Sunshine on her PA - enjoy lovely! β€οΈβ€οΈ
2017-04-18 06:55:28 +0000 UTC
Loved it - it was perfect. Looking forward to seeing what happens in that hotel room β€οΈ
2017-04-18 06:36:48 +0000 UTC
Gotta love nights like this! Costumes and masks make everything better!
2017-04-18 06:15:52 +0000 UTC
Hi Claudia, and ladies!
I survived the first day back after spring break--yay!
I have 3 pets, and 2 kids, so really 5 kids/pets π
I've never been "caught" listening to Gael since it's not really a secret that I listen, but I do have a funny Gael story. On Friday night, I sat down to listen to "Sail On" after the kids went to bed, and perhaps I was in a mood, but it really touched me, and I bawled through it. My husband walked into the living room to find me sobbing on the couch with my earbuds in. Looking at me nervously, he asked, "Uh oh, did you and your Irish boyfriend have a fight?" πππHe's adorable. So I explained why I was crying, that they were good, healing tears. He was interested and actually asked lots of questions, and I finally said, "You should listen to some of his audios--he's amazing." Then today, hubs comes up to me and whispers in my ear that I'm his good girl. Holy cow, I felt those words all over my body. When I looked at him startled, he just smiled and winked. He managed to pick up on one of my very favorite things Gael does and used it to turn me to jelly. π So apparently my hubby is in Gaelforce boot camp. No complaints here. πππ
My favorite bad joke--the pancake joke.
Restaurant customer: Waiter, will my pancakes be long?
Waiter: No, they'll be round.
πππ cracks me up every time I hear it.
I think my favorite dish to make is crockpot minestrone.
Oh gosh, I really love the Timothy Dalton adaptation of Jane Eyre. I'm still waiting on a version of Wuthering Heights that's to my liking. I love Timothy Dalton and Ralph Finnes, but neither one was Heathcliff the way I imagined him.
If monsters roamed the world, I'd be the first one eaten--I have limited mobility, so I'd make the perfect snack. No weapon could save me, but that's okay--I've accepted my fate. π
Laura
2017-04-18 06:14:42 +0000 UTC
β€οΈ From one slut to another, I loved every fucking minute of it, and I am quite looking forward to the second half....ππ btw - no, you can't escape my web π·πΈ and I'm so glad you enjoy it when I cum on your face darling because I love it too π¦π
Keep up the great work. You are an amazing artist and an awesome human being β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
2017-04-18 06:01:29 +0000 UTC
Welcome Calico!
2017-04-18 04:08:03 +0000 UTC
I'm supposed to be sleeping... but I am on fiiiiiireee π₯π₯π₯π₯
2017-04-18 03:13:13 +0000 UTC
This has that horror vibe to it we know a certain masked man is really into. He may really like Act 2. I thought it was brilliant!
2017-04-18 03:06:15 +0000 UTC
Sensual, erotic, just plain sexy AF!ππ I agree we need a continuation. Thank you to whoever requested/inspired this piece. ππGael your laugh *sigh* is my undoing EVERY SINGLE TIME! Loved the vibe/tone of your voice.π As so many others said the music was a great touch.π
2017-04-18 03:00:36 +0000 UTC
I had a long, shitty afternoon at work today. People were either showing up late, or making unreasonable demands, or telling me how they were much more qualified to do my job than I was because of the comprehensive 10-minute Google search they did on a given topic (because fuck my two university degrees, amirite?) When quittin' time rolled around, I had the "unnaturally tight smile with bonus eye twitch" look going on, and I was aching to do something to vent or ease some of my agitation.
I was initially a bit dismayed when I saw that today's new audio was erotic because I was still too irritable to get in the mood, and I knew that trying to force myself into that headspace would just frustrate me more. But then I thought, <i>"Wait, why do </i>I<i> have to change how I feel just to suit the audio? Maybe the audio should change to suit </i>me."
Now when I refer to the audio changing to suit me, I don't mean the actual content of the audio changing because, well, I can't physically alter it. But I can change how I respond to the audio. For example, just because the audio's erotic doesn't mean that my responses are limited to a) get horny or b) not get horny. Since I still pretty annoyed from my afternoon, I decided that regardless of what the audio was about, I, in the shoes of the listener, was going to vent all of my irritation and snark at Gael. My hope was that it would help me de-stress and deal with my frustration, but <i>without</i> running the risk of taking my bad mood out on someone else or hurting their feelings because both the scenario and Gael's character are entirely fictional.
So here's a look at what went down in my mind as I listened to the audio:
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<i><b>ACT 1 - The Masquerade Ball</b>
[The scene is a dimly lit ballroom, with sensual music playing in the background. Lovers dance on the ballroom floor in time with the music. Enter </i>Doctimus<i>, who gracefully descends the staircase wearing an elegant dark blue dress and a black widow mask, entirely enjoying her own company and in no way inviting any sort of male attention. From his spot by the bar where he is having difficulty holding his liquor, </i>Gael<i> spots her and walks towards her, slightly stumbling despite being only on his second glass of wine.]</i><b>(Editor's note: Wait, isn't this character supposed to be Irish? And he's already tipsy by his 2nd drink? Must check with the script writer on this one.)</b>
Gael: "<i>Conas tΓ‘ tΓΊ?</i> *something else in Gaelic that non-Gaelic speakers will not understand*"
Doctimus: *whirls around in annoyance at the interruption* "What did you just call me?!"
<i>[They converse.]</i>
Gael: "Are you here alone?"
Doctimus: "Yes, as a matter of fact, I am. And I would prefer to stay that way."
Gael: "...such a stuffy event."
Doctimus: "Actually, I was rather enjoying myself up until about 30 seconds ago. Hmm, I wonder what changed."
<i>[They converse some more.</i> Gael <i>notices the black widow mask that </i>Doctimus<i> is wearing to hide her expression of thinly disguised displeasure.]</i>
Gael: "A black widow spider. Are you going to draw me in, into your web?"
Doctimus: "By that do you mean incapacitate you and render you defenceless whilst I consume your physical form in order to ensure my own survival? Sure, works for me! Is that cool with you? I mean, it kinda sounds like you're offering here."
Gael: "You're not going to eat me after we...*raises an eyebrow salaciously*...are you?"
Doctimus: "Of course I am. Didn't we just establish that I'm a female black widow spider? That's generally what we do after getting our freak on. I didn't make the rules, dude. I just play by them."
<i>[They proceed to the dance floor.</i> Gael<i> continues to try to seduce</i> Doctimus<i>, despite her frequent verbal attempts to rebuff him.]</i>
Gael: "...I thought to myself, 'What a sexy fucking creature.'"
Doctimus: "Hey, man, please watch your fucking mouth. I don't appreciate being sworn at by strangers."
Gael: "Beautiful girl-"
Doctimus: "LADY. I'm a lady. And a black widow spider."
<i>[They continue to dance.</i> Gael<i> decided to take things to the next level. Surprisingly,</i> Doctimus<i> seems to have had a sudden and unexplained change of heart and does not reject his physical advances.]</i>
Gael: "Don't give the game away, baby..."
Doctimus: "You have your hand up my fucking dress and <i>I'm</i> the one giving the game away? Are you kidding me?"
Gael: "Grind against my bulge."
Doctimus: "Shit, is that your bulge? Oh man, please don't take this the wrong way, but I thought that was just a roll of quarters that you had in your pocket! Wow, is my face red under this mask! Yikes."
Gael: "I want to fuck you so hard and make you mine. Make you my hot little slut."
Doctimus: *smiles mischievously* "Is that so? Well, we'll just see about that, won't we?"
<i>[They exit the dance floor hand in hand.]
<b>ACT 2 - The Hotel Room</b>
[The scene is an expensively furnished suite, complete with a king size bed. Enter</i> Gael<i> and </i>Doctimus<i>.]</i>
Gael: "I'm just going to slip into something more comfortable. Make yourself at home, <i>mo grΓ‘</i>."
<i>[Gael enters the bathroom. After he leaves, </i>Doctimus<i> sighs and removes her mask before slipping out of her dress.]</i>
Gael: *through the bathroom door* "Are you ready for me to rock your fucking world?"
Doctimus: "Ready as I'll ever be!"
<i>[</i>Gael<i> opens the bathroom door. His eager smile is immediately replaced by a look of abject horror as he sees </i>Doctimus<i>, fully transformed into a human-sized black widow spider. His screams are cut short as she pounces on him and sinks her fangs into his neck. The scene fades to black as she proceeds to devour him.]</i>
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And do you know what? I felt a whole lot better after I listened to the audio. In fact, I'd say that I'm actually in a pretty good mood right now! πSo thanks to Gael and thanks to whoever this PA was designed for. ππ
(But seriously, my advice would be to never feel constrained by the tone or content of an audio. If you let your imagination run wild, you could probably make most audios work for you in some way. π)
2017-04-18 02:47:42 +0000 UTC
My new favourite audio from you Gael!!!!! Good work hun!!!
Kiara. B
2017-04-18 02:34:34 +0000 UTC
Guten Morgen Gaelandia!
Hope you are good? Having a nice Dienstag - Tuesday? Ja?
The questions... the questions... thatΒ΄s the rest of the ones I collected.
(So if you have more...? Her damit - give it to me! XD)
Do you have pets? if so how many?
Your Got-caught-listening-to-Gael stories?
Share a joke so bad it's good.
(I would be thankful if you could skip this one? I donΒ΄t like jokes... ja, IΒ΄m not kidding! XPP)
Favorite recipe?
Best film adaptation of a book?
If there were monsters roaming the world, what weapon would you use against them?
Danke, as always... bis spΓ€ter XD
2017-04-18 02:29:33 +0000 UTC
My favorite type of audios from Gael πππ
2017-04-18 01:47:02 +0000 UTC
It has been decided. You'll us part 2. Pleeeeease, pretty pleeeease..... we want it..... we want it soooooo bad! You can't leave us hanging like this ! hehehe
2017-04-18 01:37:45 +0000 UTC
Me too π
2017-04-18 01:35:28 +0000 UTC
I absolutely loved this β€οΈ it was beautiful, mysterious and very sensual! π
2017-04-18 00:47:56 +0000 UTC
New here! My first Patreon audio and I thought it was so sexy. Please don't ever stop doing what you do Gael! β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
2017-04-18 00:47:25 +0000 UTC
I loved every part of it.Your voice is deeper,sensual than ever and the music makes it more sensual.In my opinion tango is the most sensual dance between a man and a woman.How many times I typed the word sensual?Lol!I read the comments about the word slut.It's the biggest turn off for me and doesn't fit on my sexual preferences but I don't mind listening this word from you.Never worked as a turn off for me in your audios.I stick in the general idea and all the feels and to tell you the truth I had to listen the audio 2 times because the first time I didn't even notice you used the word twice.I was so into the audio!I have always on my mind that is a fantasy.
Greek Goddess
2017-04-17 23:57:21 +0000 UTC
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Bookie
2017-04-17 22:41:18 +0000 UTC
This was unbelievably hot oh my goodness...the scenario, the music, your low voice....I'm gonna need a part two!
Ellie W
2017-04-17 22:39:07 +0000 UTC
I absolutely loved this, Gael. An amazing fantasy to have. Perfection at its finest :D ;)
Lois Geal
2017-04-17 22:31:45 +0000 UTC
I should've mentioned earlier I just love when you use this tone of voice, little gravelly and a lot sensual ππππ
Kathy M
2017-04-17 22:30:51 +0000 UTC
I loved it, and the music was a great touch.
2017-04-17 21:49:40 +0000 UTC
Ok ok i can feel what happen but...give us the part two!!I love your ability of turn every fantasy so real and evolving...You are a real talent Gael!Love this way too much,keep going ππ
Jasmine sanfi
2017-04-17 21:14:39 +0000 UTC
Jeez! They work fast in Ireland ey? If a drunk man moved this fast on me when I was alone in another country, he'd recieve a swift knee-groin meeting......this one was not good for me, and I agree about Brigids slut comment.....it has to be used in the right context to be sexy
2017-04-17 21:05:18 +0000 UTC
I loved this, so different and intense. I also noticed your voice was...um, like deeper, stronger, I liked that so much. Reading that this was a PA I understand we don't get all the deep details but I enjoyed this so much. at somepoint I could picture myself swinging following the music, it was hypnotic! your words about masks and people was so interesting too!
2017-04-17 20:58:34 +0000 UTC
Hot stuff and escapist fantasy, lovely xx
Gillian Cann
2017-04-17 20:39:14 +0000 UTC
Mel!!! Drunk Gael. How fun would that be? π
Catherine
2017-04-17 20:29:46 +0000 UTC
Drunk gael finger popping on the dance floor!!! YESSSS PLEASE!! Next stop the boudoir! P.s.Can I have my panties back please?.
2017-04-17 20:20:20 +0000 UTC
I likey your lisp my Queen
Thanks for the treasure btw
I might sound proof my house with it
Lmao
2017-04-17 20:02:49 +0000 UTC
There's actually a reason why this audio is a little full on:
It was a PA to begin with and so there was a level of trust or whatever when I made it.
Also, I think that sometimes we gotta go with the fantasy and just take what we like from it.. and discard what we don't like because there's a danger of the audios becoming too safe or not sexual enough.
I'm never using the word 'slut' in a derogatory way, ever.
It's just fantasy...
And I understand and hear what's being said... I really do.
I'm open to being a slut...
Guys are sluts... real sluts.
Slut shouldn't be confined to one gender I feel...
guys gotta suck it up too..
Sexual energy doesn't give a hoot about labels...
If it's on, it's on... like
2017-04-17 19:59:16 +0000 UTC
It's a lizard king cock mask
Must explain it to you sometime like
2017-04-17 19:40:31 +0000 UTC
Well... I didnΒ΄t come here to lissten to erotic audios... but I gave it a try... to pass the time...
Mussst admit, not ssso bad (at least for a human male).
I particularly enjoyed the thought of the Black Widow eating you...
2017-04-17 19:28:26 +0000 UTC
Does anybody else wonder what mask he wears?...
I mean... the mask tells more than the real face... sometimes... hmm... just curious :)
2017-04-17 18:56:45 +0000 UTC
[Edit to update -- Not deleting, because otherwise a lot of context would disappear for subsequent discussions, though I've rarely been so tempted.]
The author's clarifications of context (this audio was a PA) and of labeling (it represents a role-play between established lovers) have resolved the concern I outlined below about how word choice made the male character come across differently to me than I knew he was intended to come across. It was fundamentally, as I saw it, a question of a possible clarity issue in the writing (because of the clear difference between authorial intent and actual effect on this listener, and apparently at least some others). The author appears to have agreed that the clarity could be improved, and has chosen to do so by adjusting the labeling on the audio. As far as I'm concerned, that completely resolves the issue I outlined & explained below. (Because it was never about my being offended by the word 'slut' -- as I've said a few times now, I'm not. It was about how the word's use in certain circumstances or ways as opposed to others could affect the characterization of the male persona and the dynamic between him and the female character in ways that lined up better or worse with what the author meant to convey, and what he meant to convey being more effective for some listeners than what actually came across to some of us prior to his clarifications. Thus, as i saw it: a possible issue with the clarity of the writing, which has since been addressed & resolved.)
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Hmm. Fair warning: honest feedback ahead. :-) A lot of this audio is hot, and there are some elements to it that I'd love to hear more of, like the masquerade premise itself, the not-so-semi public play, the dancing as foreplay and disguise. There's some lovely banter, too.
That said, there's one specific point that, *for me*, is a misfire. See, I don't get bothered by the other times you use the word "slut" in audios, for largely the reasons you've outlined: it's always been clear that there's no disrespect or judgment meant, it's just used to heighten the sexual energy, etc.
BUT within the fantasy scenario here, it's getting used within minutes of our having met this guy for the first time & in a situation where he's escalated pretty quickly from respectful, consent-is-sexy flirting to verbally equating our enjoying his fingering with sluttishness. So... here's a stranger initiating sexy shenanigans at a masked ball (yay!) while simultaneously referring to us as a slut for being into it too (wait, what?) -- sorry, that doesn't work for me.
It's a word that requires a certain level of either trust or at least benefit-of-the-doubt for someone to get away with using, and someone I've just met simply doesn't qualify -- it'd parse to me like a double-standard in this situation, which I understand is not at all how *you* mean it. But it breaks the feeling of "yeah, this is a fun fantasy" for me. Other listeners' mileage may vary, and clearly does. It's just a quirk of mine: I have to be reasonably confident of how someone doesn't mean that word for it not to be a turn-off, and that's usually clear from context, tone, or starting premise in other audios where you use it. It's clear of you as an author, as distinct from your characters, and it's almost always clear of your characters. Hence why it's never been a problem for me until this audio. A boyfriend character? No problem: the audio carries a starting assumption of trust & playfulness about it. Presumably the listener wouldn't be with him if he actually used it as a pejorative, because you don't write verbal abuse, degradation, or humiliation as a genre. A stranger on the dance floor, one I've just met? It's not so clear how he means the word, how he thinks of a woman who responds enthusiastically to such rapidly escalating advances. Maybe that's cultural; it's a kind of double standard I've seen too much of in real life, here in the States, not to have a visceral reaction to something that whiffs of it in an otherwise delightful fantasy.
Now if it had been a couple who were already involved, using the masquerade to imagine they were strangers, or if your character referred to himself that way as well instead of only to his partner... either of those tweaks would completely change the way I parsed those two moments. Because there'd be either an assumption of trust (between existing partners) or an assertion of equality (which we all know *you* stand for as a person & an artist, but isn't so much how this character's dialogue came across to me).
The first few minutes were lovely, though, as were chunks of the rest. If not for that one little issue, I'd be among those clamoring for a Part 2. *shrug* Different strokes, I suppose...
Brigid's Ember (Siren Historian & Mayoral Furniture Tester)
2017-04-17 18:41:04 +0000 UTC
Congratulations Jackie Sunshine!!!!
2017-04-17 18:40:55 +0000 UTC
Part 2! Part 2! Part 2! PLEASE?!
2017-04-17 18:38:56 +0000 UTC
Love it!!!
Kiara. B
2017-04-17 18:29:56 +0000 UTC
Double Monday Treat!
2017-04-17 17:07:00 +0000 UTC
I have a whole story already in my head!
2017-04-17 17:06:49 +0000 UTC
Part 2 please
KrystaLynne
2017-04-17 16:59:22 +0000 UTC
Oh my God! My new favourite.... so sexy! ππ
2017-04-17 16:57:42 +0000 UTC
G... I swear to all that is holy... OMG... I want part two more than I should admit. There are so many sexy things that come to mind with the anonymity of masks in place...
THIS is what I call sensual.
Kelly S
2017-04-17 16:31:42 +0000 UTC
Hi, I'm new hereπ
Last weekend I saw the musical 'Phantom of the Opera', and was thinking if Gael makes the story about Masquerade...what a timing!
2017-04-17 16:13:47 +0000 UTC
Yes a part 2 would be awesome!
2017-04-17 15:56:57 +0000 UTC
Gael, how does it make you feel that sirens swoon en masse because of you?
2017-04-17 15:43:01 +0000 UTC
Suddenly, you have many thighs, I guess? Just so they can be lifted? Clever woman!
2017-04-17 15:38:28 +0000 UTC
Like if you want a part 2! Maybe if we get enough likes we'll get one π
2017-04-17 15:38:08 +0000 UTC
The struggle is real
2017-04-17 15:36:31 +0000 UTC
πππ
2017-04-17 15:35:36 +0000 UTC
This is a beautiful piece, Gael!! Definitely at the top of your most sensual audios....
2017-04-17 15:35:23 +0000 UTC
GAEL! BAD, BAD GAEL! I am sick and I need to work! It's already hard as it is! (Oops, pardon my French)
2017-04-17 15:35:04 +0000 UTC
Nothing like signing off a boring corporate conference call to listen to a Gael audioπ Thanks for this....sooo good! β€
2017-04-17 15:33:20 +0000 UTC
Yaaaassss π³β€οΈππ½ So good! I'm still not satisfied tho π Part 2 pleeease ππ½
2017-04-17 15:29:42 +0000 UTC
I mean...what the hell can I say...seriously! I just can't articulate the level of hotness, other than to say, this is another PUSSY-CLENCHING HOTTTT audio!!!!π₯βοΈπ¦
2017-04-17 15:29:24 +0000 UTC
R.I.P. my panties! π©π¦
2017-04-17 15:26:20 +0000 UTC
This was hot π I've always loved the idea of doing that in front of people. The risk of getting caught is exciting to me ππ
2017-04-17 15:19:51 +0000 UTC
I think this is one of the sexiest pieces of yours that I've listened to. Extremely erotic. Also wouldn't be opposed to a part 2...π
2017-04-17 15:18:35 +0000 UTC
Ya can't quit. Ya might miss something.
Kathy M
2017-04-17 15:18:25 +0000 UTC
No no! Is too sexy!!!
Kathy M
2017-04-17 15:17:53 +0000 UTC
This was sooo incredibly sexy ππ₯ I wouldn't say no to a part 2...
2017-04-17 15:17:00 +0000 UTC
Well. I <em>thought</em> I was ready for work. It turns out I have to change my panties before I can leave the house......
2017-04-17 15:16:34 +0000 UTC
I quit.
Catherine
2017-04-17 15:14:57 +0000 UTC
I'm trembling here! Sultry, sensual, sexy audio goodness πππππΉπ₯
Kathy M
2017-04-17 15:13:35 +0000 UTC
Maskerades are the ultimate in YAY! Sexy maskerades are the ultimate in yay SQUARED!
2017-04-17 15:12:52 +0000 UTC
I adore the fantasy of a masquerade ball β€οΈ
2017-04-17 15:03:51 +0000 UTC
Ah! There you are! ...sssslippery mortal!
WhereΒ΄sss my key??...
2017-04-17 15:02:40 +0000 UTC
Looking foward to it. *sings Phantom of the Opera*
2017-04-17 14:58:54 +0000 UTC
This should be interesting. :)
2017-04-17 14:58:07 +0000 UTC
Right as I was about to sleep. Hehe wide awake now π
2017-04-17 14:56:02 +0000 UTC
Lovely, saving til bedtime xx
Gillian Cann
2017-04-17 14:55:40 +0000 UTC
Hope you're enjoying your holiday, darlin'!
Kelly S
2017-04-17 14:55:10 +0000 UTC
Just in time for my work break!
Wldgrl
2017-04-17 14:54:39 +0000 UTC
Sliddding into 1st
2017-04-17 14:53:59 +0000 UTC