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Twisted Lorna
Twisted Lorna

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Her secret Tinder feedback wanted (pretty please)

As promised, I thought I'd ask my beloved supporters for some feedback on how my first stab at a complete story in the form of captions was received.

I know it was far from perfect, and ultimately a lot less serious than the texting stories, but I had fun doing something a little different and, I hope, you all enjoyed along the way.

If you have time please select the best option, or comment below if you've a different opinion that I haven't covered. Even if you didn't read any of them please select that option so I know if it's not for you.

Thank you and have a great day ๐Ÿ˜Š

Comments

I was limited by the 20 image upload limit on two of the Reddit caption subs, so it was hard to balance the pacing. Part 9 actually has 2 extra images over what will be the version the caption subs get, but I think those final captions enhance the story without adding something others will miss out on. Thank you for taking the time to give me some feedback ๐Ÿ˜Š it's always appreciated

TwistedTranSista

Hellooo, so I enjoyed it. Was a fun read. Maybe Iโ€™m forgetting some details, but sometimes it felt like things developed too fast. Overall the writing was good, and the pictures as well. Iโ€™ll read everything again to give a more precise feedback

Gab


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