Early Bird: Honeymoon Manor 03
Added 2018-07-25 03:34:58 +0000 UTCHello, my lovelies! <3
In which Felix encounters a sweet-smelling bunnygirl and takes her up on her offer to guide him through a maze of scented smoke and echoing kisses that threaten to leave him dizzy, dazzled, and indelibly devoted to his new Mistress.
For once, both Canon End and Bad End are done on time! You can peruse both below!
So, reminder, since it's been a while and I have a number of new lovelies reading this: Honeymoon Manor is a collaboration between me and Carol_J, whose work is unfairly good. I can't recommend him enough—and I've heard back from multiple readers who basically just thanked me for introducing them to him, so seriously, go check him out! His work directly inspired the goblin maids who appear in Prickled and Pampered and Hearthside Haze!
Anyways, this chapter's mine. Next one is on him, and I can't wait to see what he writes for it!
The ctrl-f keyword for the branching path is, "And she blew another kiss".
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Chapter Insight (spoilers ahead):
I had a lot of trouble with this chapter's beginning, and everything else flowed extremely easily. Cocoa as a character was a lot of fun to write, and the idea of the maze fit easily into what I want to do with this series. The Bad End was almost intoxicating to write—I haven't done a story with this kind of mind control in a while, and I forgot how much fun they are to work with.
Comments
Typo: 'His eyelids drooped as She batted her eyelashes at him' Missing the S I capitalized
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2018-07-30 19:19:54 +0000 UTC