Early Bird: Intrepid Pawns, Ch. 09
Added 2017-08-24 05:41:21 +0000 UTCIn which Brist's ticklers suddenly develop very different priorities for him, Ia discovers the difference between immunity to mind control and immunity to brainwashing, and Okino is tempted in the kitchen by Ytheri's Thriae plaything.
Hey, my lovelies! Bit of a long chapter this week, so I'm actually not quite finished editing yet. But I've edited a "normal chapter quantity" of it—seriously, this one stretched out quite a ways. You can find it all in the attachment below! A rare "behind-the-curtain" look at how my stories look before I start editing.
And hey, feel free to let me know if there's anything you think I should change. Just don't tell me about the typos. I know about the typos, believe me. ;D
