NEW CHAPTER: Monstrous Ranch 7
Added 2017-08-26 07:33:50 +0000 UTCFor those of you that missed last week's Early Bird, go check it out on Literotica!
I really enjoyed this chapter, even though there's only one major sex scene in it. First off, I love fairy tales and fairy tale stylings. I also think it's got some important moments for Bobbin, who really needed to be humanized a little. Readers were right—she can't always just be the killjoy who bails Senya out. There's more of that on the way!
And for those of you wondering, yes—we are going somewhere with this. Starting with Lala and Lata, in fact, shit is going to start happening. Everything so far has largely been the introduction phase, where we get to know the key players and get some ideas of the dangers Senya faces, but it's not all fun and mind games; there is a plot to this story. I hope you enjoy what's coming next. ;)
Comments
This is useful feedback! Thank you!
Lorelei
2017-08-30 02:29:59 +0000 UTCMaybe it's just the focus on a single main character that holds my attention the most. I really like this series and no matter how many chapters you post I can't wait for more!
Yshomatsu
2017-08-29 17:38:04 +0000 UTC
