New Chapter: Intrepid Pawns 9
Added 2017-09-02 18:03:49 +0000 UTCFor those of you that missed last week's Early Bird, go check it out on Literotica!
While I'm aware of major problems that emerged when writing this series—too many main characters, a bit of a catgirl plot hijack, pacing problems—I have to admit, I really enjoyed writing this chapter. I promise, the number of main characters will be shrinking pretty soon!
This will, however, be the last IA chapter for a little while. Maybe a month. I'm going to be focusing on Ranch for the time being. It's easier to write, better-outlined, and more popular besides. ;P
Comments
And no I wasn't implying that this is your worst story!!! While it may be hard to follow who is who it's still a good story
Yshomatsu
2017-09-03 07:51:50 +0000 UTCKeep in mind your worst story is still better than many other's best story, myself included.
Yshomatsu
2017-09-02 23:41:25 +0000 UTC
