Vault: The Exquisite Garden (excerpt)
Added 2017-10-06 01:54:57 +0000 UTCHi, guys! Last post for today, I promise—I just wanted to get you all this newest edition to the Goblin Vault! :D
[Note: This story was later posted publicly and renamed to "Edentide Garden". Chapter Two is available now!
This is the start of a novel I was, up until a few months ago, hard at work at (then I put it on hold to focus entirely on Monstrous Ranch). I'm not sure when I'll get back to it, but I thought you guys might like it. <3
The Exquisite Garden: In which a knight is stranded in a strange and beautiful garden, with almost no memory of how he got there, and must trust a strange and beautiful fairy to find his way past sultry guardians who seem to know him even better than he knows himself. Luckily, he finds trusting her to be incredibly easy—as easy as falling asleep.
Comments
whenever you get the chance, this one is a favorite
2019-01-21 16:43:58 +0000 UTCOh I'd love to see more of this some time, when the writing schedule isn't so hectic.
Sothe Dain
2017-11-07 12:40:58 +0000 UTCYou've about guessed the gist! :)
Lorelei
2017-10-08 00:59:45 +0000 UTCIt was a great little story. I feel like it works great as a prologue or a standalone. As it is, the ending implies that he'll be stuck in a loop with his resistance being destroyed a little bit more each time until there is nothing left but their obedient pet.
Selestrilia
2017-10-08 00:47:29 +0000 UTCYeah, it's very much a prologue. :)
Lorelei
2017-10-06 03:49:24 +0000 UTCThis was a fun little story. It felt a little lacking in the hard story details, but Herne didn't seem to be in a position to really think much through. It did feel like a great introduction to a new cast. Thanks for the new vault addition!
Betterfornow
2017-10-06 03:16:04 +0000 UTC
