Goblin Vault: Serpent's Sway
Added 2022-03-26 18:36:45 +0000 UTCIn which sultry coil fiend Celeste pays a visit to the Gardens of Gluttony and runs into Tess, a gorgeous curvy succubus with a particular rhythm to the swinging of her hips. Who will come out on top?
Hello, my lovelies! This weeks' been hectic, but I managed to get the story edited at 3am last night. I really hope you enjoy it! It's... well, I think a lot of people like Tess because she's a big-butted succubus who collars mortals. I'm not so sure people like her for the rhyme and meter scheme. But if anyone does like meter and rhyme, this story is for you. It was an unbelievable undertaking I almost immediately regretted. Perfectionism can be self-defeating sometimes.
Anyways, enjoy!
Spoilers Below
I should note that this is the first time Celeste has lost a struggle, and I have mixed feelings about making it canon. Some dommes are not meant to lose. That's why there's some ambiguity as to who really won here.
Basically, demon fights are weird, and between closely-matched "combatants", there almost never really is a true winner. It's very rare for a demoness of similar power to truly remain under another's thumb for long.
For now, I've decided to keep this story a Goblin Vault exclusive.
Comments
2023-11-02 23:25:54 +0000 UTC
Amazing story start to finish with a cliffhanger we hope gets continued 🥰
Yshomatsu
2022-03-31 00:59:33 +0000 UTCTess so far is my favourite!
AleX
2022-03-29 09:20:15 +0000 UTCThat was great! Such a good back and forth!
Hypnopum
2022-03-29 07:45:57 +0000 UTCCeleste losing this one, however temporarily, was a specific request by the commissioner, and won't become a pattern. :)
Lorelei
2022-03-28 00:39:31 +0000 UTCThat was good, but I definitely prefer Celeste as the all conquering domme tho
Alex
2022-03-27 13:22:08 +0000 UTCThat was wonderful! I loved the rhyme, and read in time, and the narration was just divine! And the back and forths of their fight made the story feel just right! Ok, that's enough rhyming for me, but really, this is probably one of my favorites from you!
Monomonplk
2022-03-26 21:04:30 +0000 UTC
