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Early Bird: Spiraling Coils

Now fully edited!

In the Ambrosia Ranch's distant past, a most unwise man who never did inherit much of anything summoned whorelip onto the Ranch. But what else slithered out of that portal? And why does Bobbi always have to deal with it?

This is a gorgeous commission I got from the same patron who came up with the "Succubus vs. Larya" Bonus Pairing suggestion. It is set in the period during which the Ranch was run by Senya's two great-great uncles (one of whom, Romulus, was father to Senya's Great-Uncle Yvun from whom he inherited).

Minor Spoiler Territory Below:

This story, as a disclaimer, contains a female succubus creature with a cock, so a casual reminder: Body parts don't signify gender, and plenty of women in real life can have those parts. That said, in this case, we're talking about shapeshifting demons, and they just take the forms that suit them. :P 

Note that before Yvun took over and teamed up with Bobbi to make the Ranch into a more formal business venture, Masters tended to get very little done aside from screwing around with their slaves' minds. Yvun was an absolutely horrid pig of a man, but he respected Bobbin's intellect and gave her a much bigger role on the Ranch. This is a big part of why Bobbin liked Yvun.

This story is only about 75% canon—the ending is strictly a "what might have been". The coil fiend did show up, though, and did mess with her for a bit. What was the real outcome? A story for another day. ;)

Comments

This might be my favourite of your stories, so far at least.

Paul Clarke

This is such an amazing story. Love the Coil Fiend and hopefully will see it in future stories.

Titan7

Now that was a great piece of writing and introduction to a mystical creature that you made far more interesting than I had expected they were going to be.

Gavin Hahn


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