Request Thread Winners are here!
Added 2022-01-09 07:00:31 +0000 UTCFirst off we have Zero attack power chapter 9
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19xRla58-W9q-W-_oSVScsO5f545tY2CXcRlFhYHqVV8/edit?usp=sharing
and 10
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hhMP1nbbi_tHeAS-Xk8QHx-Lx4PbxW4US3zsmurx-Sw/edit?usp=sharing
Then we have the Five years sequel announcement. (This is the small bonus chapter I always upload before the next chapter drops, I'd recommend you read it.)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AqCyvH4As0sdHHlyYTjd2dC5AOP4ePJZgDyVsxSVXkA/edit?usp=sharing
Then the next sequel itself, Five Decades Of Strife
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1J4oRRrSsQzGJIaHeUQI2u_ZA9ri8Xq2sWf_JphlamJ4/edit?usp=sharing
I hope you all enjoy! I'm also just about done with Ceepert's commission, and will be moving onto full time work with Starless's very soon. I'll also probably spend my day off writing more updates for infestation so expect those up shortly as well.
Comments
What? I genuinely didn’t catch on the Hitler stand in and just assumed it just a bunch cartoonishly evil dictators. Like that never even crossed my mind. I just don’t think it makes sense in context since there is no Mexico in the MLP world. As for the Putin line. Like I’ve just completely cut myself from politics in general and it really just came out of no where and I just didn’t find all that funny and doesn’t even make sense in context.
Blade Tech
2022-01-09 19:28:29 +0000 UTCBut the earth pony is a hitler stand in. Are you annoyed at people insulting hitler? Also, mexican mud is slang for heroin, which is something he did so its not so much politcs as it is hitler. Also, come on. Putin being a dictator is funny, its not really political to point out that hes ruled for a very long time and styles himself after the dictators of yore.
Jest
2022-01-09 19:14:12 +0000 UTCAmazing job on 5 second war sequal. Seriously the dialog in the filtering between the 2 was amazing. However If it’s not to much to ask. There are 2 lines that I think should changes or cut. I understand you were going hard on the parody bad angle with those cartoonishly evil characters near the end. But can you cut the Putin line. and the Mexican mud part. I just don’t think they work and I really just don’t want social commentary in my cute mlp ship fic.
Blade Tech
2022-01-09 18:26:29 +0000 UTC
