Felarya tour flat color WIP
Added 2017-09-04 21:48:55 +0000 UTCremoved
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I wouldn't mind it myself XP it's the stomach that comes after that could be a bit problematic ^^
Karbo
2017-09-08 17:06:54 +0000 UTCOh it's a drop but there is squishy material all around you to aleviate it XD
Karbo
2017-09-08 17:05:46 +0000 UTCyou came up with a really long list so I think so yes :)
Karbo
2017-09-08 17:04:42 +0000 UTCnice name :)
Karbo
2017-09-08 16:23:41 +0000 UTCthank you ! glad you like it :D
Karbo
2017-09-07 22:31:08 +0000 UTCDon't feel pressured, I just figured I'd voice out one of my rare nitpicks :D
Agora
2017-09-07 21:51:03 +0000 UTCup to a lot of debate XD if I had to chose I think I have a weakness for Subeta ^^
Karbo
2017-09-07 21:11:07 +0000 UTCI know right ! XD
Karbo
2017-09-07 13:34:00 +0000 UTCalright I'm noting this and I'll see what I can do about it in the final version :)
Karbo
2017-09-07 13:33:04 +0000 UTCLooks great! Felaryan 'tours' are a longstanding tradition, and you'd be amazing how many natives are happy to take time out of their day to provide them. Such a friendly place! x3
PrinnyDood
2017-09-07 11:05:06 +0000 UTCYou know what, I think I liked the original B&W's last panel better. Her eyes seemed better oriented at her stomach, her lips' curves were cuter for some reason, too! The uvula shot and burp in that panel feel superfluous, as well, and I actually liked the simpleness of no stomach shot to leave it to the imagination, but that's just because I don't care for stomach shots, I think : P
Agora
2017-09-05 22:38:58 +0000 UTCReally really good :-) . Apart from the adjustments/additions you wanted to make yourself this only needs a bit more detail on the human in the fairies mouth so you can better make out that the prey is a girl (maybe by revealing more like with the prey in Melany's mouth in "Trapper and prey" for example her chest if that is still possible) with the inclusion of a saliva string directly hitting her and then it's perfect (in my opinion) . Fabulous work so far °__^.
JohnboyX
2017-09-05 19:02:14 +0000 UTCAwesome! I need a tour sometime! :3 I'd prefer a long visit to the gullet exhibit! x3
GizmoChinasa
2017-09-05 02:49:27 +0000 UTCBut who is the best tour guide in all of felarya?
Doc
2017-09-05 02:09:08 +0000 UTCUhuhuhu <3 *.*
Nikern
2017-09-04 23:33:24 +0000 UTC;3
Karbo
2017-09-04 23:23:24 +0000 UTCGod catch ! you are right :)
Karbo
2017-09-04 23:15:56 +0000 UTCOh, the internal view is new, I like it! Can I recommend making the flower in her hair a bit more of a noticeably different hue of blue than her hair? I think it's just a tiny bit too close right now. Then again, it's a WIP, so maybe you were planning to do that anyway.
Ehren
2017-09-04 22:53:46 +0000 UTCthis is hot!
2017-09-04 22:34:11 +0000 UTCWatch that last step just after the bend, its a doozie of a drop! Anything fairy is good in my book, +1 for Azure as well.
Nanakra
2017-09-04 22:15:39 +0000 UTCWill any of my suggested names be in the poll? ; w ; My company: Keep dreaming buddy.
Nodrog
2017-09-04 21:56:10 +0000 UTCWhat a kind and helpful fairy! I'd name her Azure.
Ailith
2017-09-04 21:51:47 +0000 UTC
