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yrsillar
yrsillar

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New tier added

Just a prestige tier, I don't have any goodies for you guys unfortunately, but Cyan tier backers will receive a special thanks at the end of published chapters and a place in the acknowledgements of any e-books I publish.

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Yup, no need for tangible rewards above the 3rd or 4th tier I think, ppl who want to support, will.

I'd say the pace is good, but maybe with less tea drinking sessions. It's hard to write a 'realistic' story without private meetings/spa outings/etc, but just like dialogue needs to progress the story (no one IRL talks like fictional characters, but it's totally fine) the little meetings don't always progress the story as much. That aside, totally love the story :)

The pacing is something that I need to work on but I do not believe I am capable of writing that many chapters while maintaining anything like actual quality in my writing. I will have other projects coming in the future though.

Yrsillar

Well if you could, add more advanced chapters. If finance is important for you, here is a suggestion to hit at least 3000$/month within the next six months. 1. Focus more on progression of the main story, while the story is rich and full I think you would have more happy readers of the progression was a tad faster. I think the story at this point should have reached the second year. 2. Begin to stockpile chapters and when you have enough change your Patreon tier system to the following: Red soul - 5$ 10 advance chapters Yellow - 10$ 20 advance chapters Green - 15$ 30 advance chapters Cyan - 20$ 40 advance chapters Fifth realm - 25$ 50 advance chapter Sixth realm 30$ 60 advance chapters

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