Finished a bunch of panels...
Added 2017-08-14 06:57:21 +0000 UTC...for THE PRANK pages 1 and 2. THE PRANK will be 3-4 pages long, depending on how I decide to segue into THE DOMME. I do need to make a couple script adjustments to THE DOMME, but I'd still like to finish THE PRANK this week. Fingers crossed!
Comments
Upper arms seen without hands can seem very thin ... and she's got her arms clenched to her sides, probably slightly underneath the curve of her body, thus making them seem even thinner.
Fyunch Click
2017-08-15 00:22:32 +0000 UTCNo problem! :)
kou32
2017-08-14 23:54:29 +0000 UTCGood note. I agree. I tend to work on the panels individually and then drop them into the page. She does look a bit stretched. I should be able to fix that pretty easily. Thanks! :)
Stereoscope Comics
2017-08-14 23:53:00 +0000 UTCI love her expressions in all of these. I also, really do love how expressive you make your characters. Something I noticed in the first panel is that something seems a bit off, ellie looks a little too thin. It might be due to the perspective but she seem a lot smaller and thinner than she does in the other panels.
kou32
2017-08-14 23:41:23 +0000 UTCLooking good!
Michael
2017-08-14 14:47:06 +0000 UTC
