Friends at a Party pg 4...
Added 2017-07-03 20:13:37 +0000 UTC...of 5. Only two pages to go!!! :)
I think I may be a bit of a perfectionist (NO!) as I spent a lot of time on this page, but I'm happy with the results. There are a couple little bits I'd like to...adjust, but looking at it now, It's probably unnecessary.
One thing I do plan to change (as soon as I figure out how) is to remove the Fifty Shades of Gray reference. It's important for the set up and is loosely based on actual events, but it dates the comic. I don't see Fifty Shades disappearing any time soon from the zeitgeist (I think it will always be held up as an example of bad writing and what not to do), but if I can find a way to remove it, I will.
Let me know if I misspelled anything. Onto the next page!
Comments
Not a bad idea, but I want to try and keep my distance from Sunstone. I love sunstone and black label is definitely inspired by it, but I want black label to stand on its own, and not just be diet sunstone. A couple subtle references here and there shouldn't hurt though.
Stereoscope Comics
2017-08-14 19:40:26 +0000 UTCHow about mentioning Sunstone instead? It's not quite got the mainstream buzz of 50 Shades, but perhaps we can pretend that it does.
Fyunch Click
2017-08-14 19:30:02 +0000 UTCThanks! Hope to have it up before the weekend. Will post some updates tonight.
Stereoscope Comics
2017-07-06 16:25:53 +0000 UTCSooo. We have to thank Marcus? Looking forward to see the next part. :)
foogee
2017-07-05 05:27:38 +0000 UTCThis is really cool, looking forward to seeing the two of them official meet! π
kou32
2017-07-04 00:32:30 +0000 UTCI would no return the book. It seems like a fun night stand book (kept in the draws).
2017-07-04 00:18:37 +0000 UTCAww.... what a sweet, thoughtful gift! ^w^
DM_5
2017-07-03 21:08:11 +0000 UTC
