Lunch pg 5...
Added 2017-11-09 19:49:46 +0000 UTC...and only two pages to go!
I'm on the road all weekend (big surprise), so I want to try and get one more page out this week (so long as I don't sacrifice the quality).
Man, this comic has been a challenge. It was originally 14 pages! I had to cut out a lot of interesting conversation. Sadly, as fun as a lot of it was, it didn't serve much purpose. It didn't tell us anything we didn't know about the characters, it didn't teach us anything about bondage or S&M, and most importantly, it didn't move the story forward (it was mostly just me being clever or silly). Sad to cut it all, but I think there are some bits I'll be able to save for later.
Okay, onto the next page!
Comments
oh this is lovely. :3
Kostas
2017-11-09 20:43:42 +0000 UTCThanks! There’s a bunch of details about bdsm I want to cover. Basically as much as I can. I wanted to cover pleasure/pain here, must it was too muddled and didn’t make sense. Think I have a better way to cover it later. Something else to look forward to! 😁
Stereoscope Comics
2017-11-09 20:27:23 +0000 UTCVery cute and loving to see how this relationship is developed.
2017-11-09 19:58:10 +0000 UTCThank You!! Thank you for addressing this, "It doesn't have to be sexual" another thing that is almost never addressed in BDSM! That is is a great way to explain it to people, a sensory experience. The little banter at the end is great, your characters are awesome! It suck you had to scrap that much content, I do look forward to seeing what you saved. Again, another fantastic update, they are always a high light of my day! :D
kou32
2017-11-09 19:56:51 +0000 UTCStep into my Parlour, said Meg under her breath ;)
Michael
2017-11-09 19:56:00 +0000 UTC
