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The Freakout pg 2...

...not the final page, but I thought I'd share it.  Maybe get your thoughts.  Not sure how I feel about it.  Feels like it's missing something.

That and the last panel is a little lopsided (and I have toned her skin yet.

Also...I think I'm really impatient to get to the bondage scene three pages from now!!!!!!!

The Freakout pg 2...

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Don’t worry, I’ve got that part covered. I think what was bugging me here was in part the layout. Its bugging much less now that I’ve had a few days to look at it. :)

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Hmm, maybe have meg working on something else? like show her doing some leather work, so she can work out some frustration and we get to see her do more of her craft. Then transition. but I'm not sure what happens next so that might interrupt the flow.

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