Page 19 update...
Added 2019-06-18 19:41:47 +0000 UTC...I added the extra panel at the end and reformatted the panels so there would be more space between panels 5 and 6. Hopefully the extra space will show that a bit of time has passed and the added panel will make Ellie's excited response on page twenty less abrupt.
As a quick reminder, here's page 20.
I think this fixes it. Let me know what you think.
Comments
Thumbs up on the change it works much better then before.
Odiumed
2019-06-19 11:21:22 +0000 UTCAnd so you shall. :)
Stereoscope Comics
2019-06-19 03:56:15 +0000 UTCStill want to see them play a little. I want to know what kind of characters they play.
2019-06-19 03:37:34 +0000 UTCThat helps a lot. A great transition panel and helps with the flow better.
kou32
2019-06-19 03:20:45 +0000 UTCSmoother transition for sure, not that it was wrong before, but it's better now :)
Michael
2019-06-18 20:28:12 +0000 UTCDefinitely gives the comic better flow.
Brad Kitts
2019-06-18 19:52:11 +0000 UTC
