BLACK LABEL Chapter 4, page 1...
Added 2019-11-08 06:28:42 +0000 UTC...Let the games begin!
Starting a new chapter is always a bit intimidating (we've got a long road ahead) but it's going to be a fun challenge.
I experimented a little. I did panels 2-3 in pencil rather than digital. It is still a challenge to do the final lines in digital especially when there are a lot of curves involved. let me know if it stands out to you or not. Hopefully it's not a distraction.
Gonna start page 2 tomorrow. Goodnight everyone!
Comments
I hope so. 😙🎶
Stereoscope Comics
2019-11-09 04:33:42 +0000 UTCNeed more hearts ...
Fyunch Click
2019-11-09 03:18:48 +0000 UTCPanels 3 and 4: Woo, look at those puppies getting squeezed! :P
Shrub Jump
2019-11-09 02:50:36 +0000 UTCThis is going to be a very interesting game night for Ellie :)
Michael
2019-11-09 00:57:14 +0000 UTCNo prob!
Stereoscope Comics
2019-11-08 18:17:37 +0000 UTCAh that explains why I was confused. I usually just read the comics (lol sorry). Thank you
Brad Kitts
2019-11-08 18:16:37 +0000 UTCVery well said!
kou32
2019-11-08 18:07:07 +0000 UTCThanks! I’ll fix that!
Stereoscope Comics
2019-11-08 18:06:30 +0000 UTCAck! Thanks! I’ll fix that up! 👍
Stereoscope Comics
2019-11-08 18:06:01 +0000 UTCYou did
kou32
2019-11-08 18:05:56 +0000 UTCA long comment and I appreciate it. It tells me the story is moving in the right direction. Thanks!
Stereoscope Comics
2019-11-08 18:05:31 +0000 UTCNope. I decided to cut it because it didn’t do anything to build tension. It was just fluff/filler. I mentioned it in the weekly Update (at least I think I did). 🤔
Stereoscope Comics
2019-11-08 18:02:49 +0000 UTCNope
kou32
2019-11-08 17:57:44 +0000 UTCI wonder if any of the other players will notice that Ellie could etch glass right now...
Henri Black
2019-11-08 17:32:53 +0000 UTCGood page, but I can't help but point out it should be "No peeking" and not "No peaking"
hmgirlpopuri
2019-11-08 12:55:34 +0000 UTCVery fine panel; not seeing any distraction from the penciled panels at all. Only thing...was Meg supposed to have lipstick in the "alright" panel? Cause she was wearing lipstick on the last pages of the previous chapter.
UrbanVerse
2019-11-08 12:31:50 +0000 UTCObviously Meg is taking it step by step. First bondage on cloths, now under cloths, next step: nothing but bondage "gear". Not to scare away Ellie. I like how Meg developed during course of the comic. First she was aiming at her dream of being dominatrix (and Ellie was only a tool for that). Meg was fully in control of sitiuation. Then it backfired - she started to really care about Ellie. Dream about Ellie took control over Meg. Now she kinda bounced back from that to place where she is no longer a slave of her desires, but dominates instead. Yet Meg stills wants Ellie and Ellie alone. Really good roller coaster. Damn, that's a long comment.
Fenix
2019-11-08 12:15:08 +0000 UTCLooking good, but I thought Chapter 3 had one more page. Did I miss it?
Brad Kitts
2019-11-08 10:51:47 +0000 UTCVery Nice !
Laurent Lacouture
2019-11-08 06:39:32 +0000 UTCA very fun page and great looking sequence of rope work! I like that Meg has Ellie experiencing the rope by keeping her eyes closed and also doing a bit of Dom/Sub play by following orders/directions. A fun surprise for her and us!
kou32
2019-11-08 06:35:20 +0000 UTCOn ellie's right upper side. second panel, bra strap. There is a change in the line thickness. But not distracting. Might not have noticed if you didn't mention it.
kou32
2019-11-08 06:33:17 +0000 UTC
