Page 14 v.2...
Added 2020-02-15 07:08:51 +0000 UTC...Made a couple changes (just the white frame and panel 4 white background and no blush on Sam. Debating which one I like best. Feel free to share your thoughts. Thanks!
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Comments
I think it's better without the blush on Sam, but you should also keep from version 1 how the page gets darker as it goes on. It conveys that the scene is getting more intense.
PiLambdaOd
2020-02-16 03:54:56 +0000 UTCI can see Meg using it during training later lol.
Henri Black
2020-02-15 22:08:35 +0000 UTCGreat line: "Never piss off the dungeon master!"
Fyunch Click
2020-02-15 17:05:48 +0000 UTCI agree.
the_iceman
2020-02-15 10:04:36 +0000 UTCIt's better for the removal of the blush but loses some of the impact without the transition and darker background on Sam... Now just post v.3 and we'll all probably nitpick that as well :).
Henri Black
2020-02-15 08:41:38 +0000 UTCThe dark background on Sam makes it feel like she’s all. “You F up big on that.”
2020-02-15 07:59:29 +0000 UTCI think removing the blush from Sam was a good idea. It seemed a bit odd to me. But the gradual shift should stay. It helps build the tone and sense of dread that Meg is feeling.
kou32
2020-02-15 07:46:44 +0000 UTCThis one is nice but I have to say that the 1st version is slightly better due to its gradual transition into black and the blush brings the character to life and adds personality.
Rick
2020-02-15 07:20:54 +0000 UTC
