BL Chapter 4, Page 19...
Added 2020-03-15 23:46:13 +0000 UTC...I'm thinking of redoing panel 3. I wanted to bring across the idea that there are other things going on while they whisper, but I think it might be more interesting to have Meg leaning toward Ellie to whisper. I'll do some sketching to see what I think, so there may be an update to this page next week. Either way, let me know your thoughts.
Hope everyone is having a great weekend!
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I'm beginning to think Ellie wants a dirt bike. No idea why...
foogee
2020-03-16 20:46:51 +0000 UTCI agree. I think I can fix it though. We shall see. Thanks for the constructive feedback! 👍
Stereoscope Comics
2020-03-16 17:36:14 +0000 UTCI'm gonna have to start charging a commission lol.
Henri Black
2020-03-16 15:03:43 +0000 UTCfun and well drawn. however it walks on the edge of what can pass unnoticed at a usual-sized table and that makes it slightly less believable. still, i like it.
Night Potato
2020-03-16 12:13:55 +0000 UTCThis is going to be one interesting game...
Michael
2020-03-16 07:41:46 +0000 UTCIt's a song...
Henri Black
2020-03-16 05:20:01 +0000 UTCI think we get the picture. ^_^
Shrub Jump
2020-03-16 04:56:03 +0000 UTCspecifically seafood tacos. of the vertical variety... (Google "vertical seafood taco" if you don't get it lol)
Henri Black
2020-03-16 04:05:32 +0000 UTCSay it ain’t so! I’ll be honest, this comic is surprising me a lot as I get it written out. I’m hoping it doesn’t get too heavy, but it’s not impossible.
Stereoscope Comics
2020-03-16 03:44:43 +0000 UTCYou’re not wrong. I think Meg can be forgiven though as the noob of the group.
Stereoscope Comics
2020-03-16 03:43:35 +0000 UTCBut I thought the prize was Meg taking Ellie out for tacos...in order to gauge her interest in them, of course! ;) JK Great page!
Shrub Jump
2020-03-16 02:09:49 +0000 UTCDon’t mess with a girl’s DIRT BIKE!
Odiumed
2020-03-16 02:09:08 +0000 UTCI dare to say that all is going on a straight highway to inevitable conclusion. I doubt there is going to be any meaningful twist or turn.
Fenix
2020-03-16 01:34:07 +0000 UTCThe lifelong RPG player in me is horribly offended by their choice of venue for bondage-dares. You only get out of an RPG what you put in, and if you're sitting there distracted by knots in your groin doing their thing you might as well not be playing. From a GM perspective they're like the bondage-play version of that jerk who sits there screwing with their phone for half the game.
Mako + HannaPhilip
2020-03-16 01:28:06 +0000 UTCStay safe
kou32
2020-03-16 01:10:15 +0000 UTCStay safe
kou32
2020-03-16 01:09:50 +0000 UTCI’m stealing this! 😙🎶 Seriously, great point! Made me chuckle!
Stereoscope Comics
2020-03-16 01:02:03 +0000 UTCnah, they get married and the celebrant..... IS A DIRT BIKE!!!!!!!!!
Henri Black
2020-03-16 01:01:42 +0000 UTCMeg will tie her up with a much more elaborate harness before she rides the dirt bike just to make it memorable
Henri Black
2020-03-16 01:00:57 +0000 UTCSame here. Just found out that comics are now my full time job for the next 3 weeks minimum. It’s been an interesting weekend.
Stereoscope Comics
2020-03-16 01:00:38 +0000 UTCOh it's on now. If she can't handle a couple of nots how can she handle a dirt bike constantly rubbing down there.
Rick
2020-03-16 00:59:43 +0000 UTCThat sounds like how I willingly choose to spend all of my birthdays lol.
Henri Black
2020-03-16 00:58:06 +0000 UTCMan Ellie REALLY wants that dirt bike
Henri Black
2020-03-16 00:57:47 +0000 UTCLike i'm calling it now , the last chapter, during the ending, Ellie and Meg are going to ride away on a Dirt Bike. XD
Brad Kitts
2020-03-16 00:32:53 +0000 UTCHappy Birthday! I hope you’re able to take time out to do something special! 🥳
Stereoscope Comics
2020-03-16 00:29:08 +0000 UTCWe can only hope. 🤪
Stereoscope Comics
2020-03-16 00:28:26 +0000 UTCDIRT BIKE!
Silence
2020-03-16 00:12:36 +0000 UTCThis Dirt Bike brick joke is going to come full circle someday isn't it?
Brad Kitts
2020-03-16 00:06:57 +0000 UTCHmm, it would be interesting to see them leaning in. But I do like the current panel and the reminder that the game is still going on. You could have silhouettes of them in the panels and still keep the current background. (might be a bit busy, just a thought.) I do love this page, the conversation is fun and Meg goading Ellie to stay in the game. XD
kou32
2020-03-15 23:51:28 +0000 UTCI KNEW THERE WAS GONNA BE A PUSSY KNOT
CC
2020-03-15 23:47:25 +0000 UTC
