BLACK LABEL Chapter 4, Page 2...
Added 2019-11-16 03:04:55 +0000 UTC...Glad I took the extra time. Not sure how I feel about the reaction lines in the first panel. Kinda hot and cold about them. Let me know what you think of her expression too.
Gonna do some sketching and then I'm gone for the weekend (most of it anyway). Can't wait to see what I come up with. This is gonna be a fun chapter!
Have a great weekend!
Comments
Beautiful! Love the expression, love the work you put into these ropes, love Meg hovering just out of the way...just beautiful. (Way to squeeze Ellie's puppies, too! :P ) The reaction lines are perfectly suited to the first panel, by the way. You are drawing in a manga style, after all...
Shrub Jump
2019-11-17 01:00:36 +0000 UTCYeah, just enough Meg in the frame. I can't wait to see how distracted Ellie is during the gaming.
Fritz Sands
2019-11-16 23:05:22 +0000 UTCI really want to see how smug megs face looks right now...
Henri Black
2019-11-16 22:41:28 +0000 UTCwith those pleasure knots, the two things are probably happening for the same reason. In fact the one likely leads to the other...
Henri Black
2019-11-16 22:14:48 +0000 UTCAre you? XD
kou32
2019-11-16 20:22:02 +0000 UTCI think they'll wonder more about why she's breathing so hard.
Drago86
2019-11-16 19:48:25 +0000 UTCI feel like people are going to be wondering why Ellie won't stop fidgeting during game night
Henri Black
2019-11-16 18:21:34 +0000 UTCMaybe a superposing pannel. Like on the right over pannel 1 and 2
Laurent Lacouture
2019-11-16 15:57:13 +0000 UTCI miss a lit pannel with Meg smile of total love of ellie's reaction
Laurent Lacouture
2019-11-16 15:55:56 +0000 UTCAwesome indeed!!!
Waistknot
2019-11-16 15:37:34 +0000 UTCIf Ellie's reaction is so positive then it means everything goes directly towards first two pages of Black Label.
Fenix
2019-11-16 12:21:49 +0000 UTCyeah... :D
the_iceman
2019-11-16 11:55:51 +0000 UTCOne word Awesome!
Odiumed
2019-11-16 11:35:54 +0000 UTCNow, I am curious how she ends up in Meg's dungeon.
O911
2019-11-16 08:52:20 +0000 UTCI like the first panel with the reaction lines, its a visual version of "Mind Blown" which seems entirely appropriate for Ellie right now :)
Michael
2019-11-16 08:03:00 +0000 UTCNot sure about the reaction lines, but there should probably be a smug Meg visible in the mirror.
Psuedonymous
2019-11-16 06:37:01 +0000 UTCSweet, looking forward to it ^^
kou32
2019-11-16 04:24:30 +0000 UTCSoon! Next couple pages are gonna be fun! :D
Stereoscope Comics
2019-11-16 04:10:22 +0000 UTCThe...the pain...the...the cringe...๐
Stereoscope Comics
2019-11-16 04:09:20 +0000 UTCAnyway, a great page and reveal, I like that you found a way to Keep Meg in frame. Loving Meg's expression in the second panel. Bewildered, but enjoying herself.
kou32
2019-11-16 03:26:16 +0000 UTCsomeone is going to be squirming in their chair, unfocused, for the rest of the night. Let the games begin
smack54
2019-11-16 03:26:04 +0000 UTCMaybe a more bewildered, "...whoa." Like she can't believe what she's seeing. I could see her slowly rubbing her hands down her body. Admiring the rope work and how it accentuates her body. I imagine Ellie never would have imagined herself in this situation. She's trying to comprehend/process it all. But She knows she's loving it!
kou32
2019-11-16 03:25:04 +0000 UTCI think it looks great. I'm looking forward to how gamenight will go. I suspect Ellie will have some trouble avoiding tying herself up in knots during it. :P (i'm so sorry)
Matlef
2019-11-16 03:15:52 +0000 UTCCool. I have issues with a lot of things, but if you guys are cool with them then Iโm in good shape.
Stereoscope Comics
2019-11-16 03:09:29 +0000 UTCYou sometimes have an issue with action lines ๐ But they look well placed and the page looks amazing โค
Raven-rj
2019-11-16 03:08:23 +0000 UTCShe'll probably like it more if she ends up wearing it all evening.
Brad Kitts
2019-11-16 03:06:43 +0000 UTC
