Chapter 5 BONUS...
Added 2021-02-19 00:44:49 +0000 UTC...A little something to hold you guys over as I work on finish polishing up the chapter 6 script. Hope to have it done tomorrow so we can start the next page on Monday. Currently the script is in two parts, each part being between 15 and 20 pages. I'm hoping to keep the chapter below 35 pages. ^^;
I do like this comic, but I'm thinking of redoing the last panel so that Ellie is standing outside, leaning against a tree. Also, since the comic fills half a page, I should figure out what will take up the other half. Probably not a comic, but perhaps a nice Ellie pin up. :)
Goodnight everyone!
Comments
I would never dare to presume the direction of the story (he says, before daring to presume the direction of the story) - but I just had an idea for the last panel. Panicked Ellie, in the underwear, harness still on, on the phone. "I can't this off and I don't want to cut it. Help!" Pause. "Mistress." That way it also closes off Meg's challenge at the end of the chapter.
PsyGremlin
2021-03-19 08:55:20 +0000 UTCGlad to she finally got done with the foreplay.
Dragon86
2021-02-19 22:31:54 +0000 UTCThat’s the sound of someone remembering what they forgot.
DuskStealth
2021-02-19 18:53:40 +0000 UTCAn alternative to Patreon. Same idea, but they're not as trigger-happy with their litigations.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-02-19 18:37:48 +0000 UTCim always down for longer chapters but to each there own it is all great and enjoyable
Hypnotickagon
2021-02-19 18:21:59 +0000 UTCDefinitely worth pursuing. Figure I’ll at least sign up today. A poll is a good idea! Thanks!
Stereoscope Comics
2021-02-19 15:43:34 +0000 UTCSo many moves on the horizon! :D
Stereoscope Comics
2021-02-19 15:42:09 +0000 UTCWhat do you mean? Why would it be ruined? What's subscriber star?
PulpFiction
2021-02-19 15:41:48 +0000 UTCSo Ellie *is* a screamer. Nice. Cue old joke: My parents got me a sweater for Christmas. I was hoping for a moaner, or screamer. I also like the idea of Ellie leaning on a tree - sort of like she was on the table, after her first... surprise.
PsyGremlin
2021-02-19 11:24:35 +0000 UTCMust have been fun for Ellie...
the_iceman
2021-02-19 08:20:17 +0000 UTCHaha, well I think half the county heard that!
Michael
2021-02-19 07:24:07 +0000 UTCAs a final note though, I'm going to repeat my request you take the leap of moving to subscriber star, or at the very least pole if people will follow you there. I SERIOUSLY do not want to see this comic ruined, and suspect I'm not alone in that fear.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-02-19 06:43:54 +0000 UTCOn a side note, I was worried Sam had somehow figured out what was up with Ellie and was plotting to seduce Val or something. I like that she's still in the dark. It'll make Meg's next move all the more adorable as SHE, the oh-so-confident Sam looses her cool. (If that bonus comic was any indicator.)
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-02-19 06:42:57 +0000 UTCHah! Ellie asked for it, leaping like that. Oh, I hope Meg somehow heard!
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-02-19 06:37:36 +0000 UTChehehe
kou32
2021-02-19 03:26:26 +0000 UTCLol we all know what just happened the kids don't but we know what happened. Also kids should not be reading this
Rick
2021-02-19 00:46:49 +0000 UTCNot much of a spoiler, lmao.
Henri Black
2021-02-19 00:45:28 +0000 UTC
