Page 52 Update
Added 2024-10-16 01:32:27 +0000 UTCI was struggling to get the pacing and panel count to work on the next page, when it suddenly ocurred to me that, since I needed to update t
I was struggling to get the pacing and panel count to work on the next page, when it suddenly ocurred to me that, since I needed to update the text in panel 5 anyway, I could basically move the first panel of page 53 back to 52. Tightens everything up nicely and I think adds a lot to this page as well.
Alright! I'm back to work on page 53 and 54! Can't wait to share!
Comments
Hell yeah!
Stereoscope Comics
2024-10-16 22:45:27 +0000 UTCIs this a βdrop it you looseβ kinda game?
Ethan
2024-10-16 13:39:04 +0000 UTCLast panel definitely makes it more intriguing π€
Bruce Burding
2024-10-16 11:24:55 +0000 UTC"GAH!" We hear ya, Ellie. We hear ya.
George
2024-10-16 10:10:14 +0000 UTCThis shtick works better with a flogger, but I guess a crop is easier to bite down on - and she's already ruined it, so no big loss there... ;)
Amber7
2024-10-16 08:28:29 +0000 UTCIt's the same.
Gorastet
2024-10-16 07:55:53 +0000 UTCWas Ellie biting her lip in the next to last panel originally? That's either new, or I missed it the first time.
Katt Wallingford
2024-10-16 04:51:08 +0000 UTChehehe, poke the dom and see what happens XD
kou32
2024-10-16 03:16:35 +0000 UTCsheβs like ok now I find it cute bite it again π
engagecrayfish0
2024-10-16 03:14:36 +0000 UTCoooo yes this pacing is good.
Ian Price
2024-10-16 02:26:09 +0000 UTCOh now this is WAY better!
Death of Ink
2024-10-16 02:08:08 +0000 UTCOh, that is delightful!
Fritz Sands
2024-10-16 01:46:12 +0000 UTCOh my that is soon much better. Definitely shows a little more attitude adjustment hehe
Michael Kehoe
2024-10-16 01:43:09 +0000 UTCMeg ain't about to let Ellie win.
Brad Kitts
2024-10-16 01:41:49 +0000 UTCSuch a brat! :-D
Cheshire Noir
2024-10-16 01:34:10 +0000 UTC
